A English syntax error in section title

wuzhouhui wuzhouhui14 at mails.ucas.ac.cn
Sun Nov 12 00:36:19 CST 2017

I'm not a English-native speaker, but according to my knowledge learned from
school, should we add a preposition between "Tracking" and "Unaware", like

Index: en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml
diff --git a/trunk/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml b/trunk/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml
--- a/trunk/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml	(revision 5490)
+++ b/trunk/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml	(working copy)
@@ -3178,7 +3178,7 @@ D    src/integer.c
     <!-- =============================================================== -->
     <sect2 id="svn.branchmerge.advanced.pre1.5clients">
-      <title>Blocking Merge Tracking Unaware Clients</title>
+      <title>Blocking Merge Tracking For Unaware Clients</title>
       <para>If you've just upgraded your server to Subversion 1.5 or
         later, there's a risk that pre-1.5 Subversion

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