[svnbook commit] r3238 - in trunk/src/en: . book

cmpilato noreply at red-bean.com
Mon Aug 4 11:57:52 CDT 2008


Author: cmpilato
Date: Mon Aug  4 11:57:51 2008
New Revision: 3238

Log:
Up-to-date/out-of-date hyphen juggling.

Modified:
   trunk/src/en/HACKING
   trunk/src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml

Modified: trunk/src/en/HACKING
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/HACKING	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/HACKING	Mon Aug  4 11:57:51 2008
@@ -46,6 +46,8 @@
 
      datatype (n.)
      logfile (n.)
+     out of date (see "up to date")
+     out-of-date (see "up-to-date")
      plain-text (adj.)
      up to date (as in, "bring the working copy up to date")
      up-to-date (adj., as is "an up-to-date working copy")

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml	Mon Aug  4 11:57:51 2008
@@ -477,7 +477,7 @@
       <para>When the server sends changes to your working copy via
         <command>svn update</command>, a letter code is displayed next
         to each item to let you know what actions Subversion performed
-        to bring your working copy up-to-date.  To find out what these
+        to bring your working copy up to date.  To find out what these
         letters mean, run <userinput>svn help update</userinput>.</para>
 
     </sect2>
@@ -2201,7 +2201,7 @@
       <para>If you're likely to use a working copy again, there's
         nothing wrong with just leaving it on disk until you're ready
         to use it again, at which point all it takes is an
-        <command>svn update</command> to bring it up-to-date and ready
+        <command>svn update</command> to bring it up to date and ready
         for use.</para>
 
       <para>However, if you're definitely not going to use a working

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml	Mon Aug  4 11:57:51 2008
@@ -1526,7 +1526,7 @@
       file changes, and more importantly, just
       <emphasis>after</emphasis> the file changes, it is a hassle
       for any process except the version control system to keep
-      the data completely up-to-date.  Left to human authors, the
+      the data completely up to date.  Left to human authors, the
       information would inevitably grow stale.</para>
 
     <para>For example, say you have a document in which you would

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	Mon Aug  4 11:57:51 2008
@@ -3253,7 +3253,7 @@
           <title>Examples</title>
 
           <para>Merge a branch back into the trunk (assuming that
-            you have an up to date working copy of the trunk).</para>
+            you have an up-to-date working copy of the trunk).</para>
 
           <screen>
 $ svn merge --reintegrate \
@@ -4768,7 +4768,7 @@
 </screen>
 
           <para>If you want to find out what files in your working
-            copy are out-of-date, pass the
+            copy are out of date, pass the
             <option>--show-updates</option> option (this will
             <emphasis>not</emphasis> make any changes to your
             working copy).  Here you can see that




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