[svnbook] : Misc Comments on the latest book (v1.4)
rus.cahimb at gmail.com
Sun Jan 28 07:02:08 CST 2007
Downloaded the latest v1.4 SVN book as PDF and started reading chapter
6 for my requirements.
Kindly ignore them, if you are already working on them.
I have the following comments on this chapter 6, Server Configuration.
The Apache HTTP Server in pg 135 (pg 157 in PDF reader).
How it works:
Install and configure and standard Apache 2.0 server . . .
I think this should be,
Install and configure a standard Apache 2.0 server . . .
pg 137 in PDF (pg 159 in PDF reader).
. Do not be seduced by the simple idea of having . . . , and can
entail all the same problems if the administrator isn't careful.)
-- Ending bracket does not have a matching opening bracket.
-- in lieu of "administrator" is it nice to have "system administrator" ?
pg 138 in PDF (pg 160 in PDF reader).
If the client was not authenticated . . . then the revision's
svn:author property is empty.
-- number "1" should be at the end of the word "empty"
pg 139 in PDF (pg 161 in PDF reader).
. . . be presented to the srever if the server requests them. 2
Text for reference 2 is shown in the next page 139 and not in the same
page where it appears i.e in page 140.
pg 140 in PDF (pg 162 in PDF reader)
. the user wants to authenticate as a different user than her system
login name, or
Can this be re-phrased as,
. the user wants to authenticate as a user different than the system
login name, or
. the user wants to authenticate as a different user than his / her
system login name, or
pg 141 in PDF (pg 163 in PDF reader)
svnserve over a Tunnel
Can this title be moved to the next page 142 to match with it's contents ?
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