[PATCH] Fix some typos in ref-svn.xml

C. Michael Pilato cmpilato at red-bean.com
Mon May 20 07:33:18 CDT 2019


Thanks for your careful attention to detail.  This is all looks good to
me.  +1 to commit.  And you could even go even a step further, be replacing
the word "revs" with "revisions" in "If TARGET is a URL, then revs N and M
...".

-- Mike

On Mon, May 20, 2019 at 7:51 AM wuzhouhui <wuzhouhui14 at mails.ucas.ac.cn>
wrote:

> * en/book/ref-svn.xml
>   Fix some typos
>
> Index: book/ref-svn.xml
> ===================================================================
> --- book/ref-svn.xml    (revision 5915)
> +++ book/ref-svn.xml    (working copy)
> @@ -2183,7 +2183,8 @@
>          </variablelist>
>
>        <para>If no peg revision (i.e.,
> -        <replaceable>@REV</replaceable>) is supplied, by default
> +        <literal>@<replaceable>REV</replaceable></literal>) is supplied,
> +        by default
>          the <literal>BASE</literal> revision will be used for
>          files copied from the working copy, while the
>          <literal>HEAD</literal> revision will be used for files
> @@ -2233,8 +2234,7 @@
>  </screen>
>        </informalexample>
>
> -      <para>Copy several files in a working copy into a
> -        subdirectory:</para>
> +      <para>Copy several files in a working copy into a directory:</para>
>
>        <informalexample>
>          <screen>
> @@ -2422,7 +2422,7 @@
>        </informalexample>
>
>        <para>Here's an example of how to force deletion of a file
> -        that has local mods:</para>
> +        that has local modifications:</para>
>
>        <informalexample>
>          <screen>
> @@ -2560,7 +2560,7 @@
>        <para><userinput>svn diff OLD-URL[@OLDREV]
>          NEW-URL[@NEWREV]</userinput> is shorthand for <userinput>svn
>          diff --old=OLD-URL[@OLDREV]
> -        --new=NEW-URL[@NEWREV].</userinput></para>
> +        --new=NEW-URL[@NEWREV]</userinput>.</para>
>
>        <para><userinput>svn diff -r N:M URL</userinput> is shorthand
>          for <userinput>svn diff -r N:M --old=URL
> @@ -2571,7 +2571,8 @@
>          N[:M]] --old=URL1 --new=URL2</userinput>.</para>
>
>        <para>If <replaceable>TARGET</replaceable> is a URL, then
> -        revs <literal>N</literal> and <literal>M</literal> can be
> +        revs <replaceable>N</replaceable> and <replaceable>M</replaceable>
> +        can be
>          given either via the
>          <option>--revision</option> (<option>-r</option>) option
>          or by using the
> @@ -4019,8 +4020,8 @@
>              (<replaceable>SOURCE</replaceable>).
>              <quote>Eligible</quote> changes are defined as those that
>              were not previously merged from
> -            (<replaceable>SOURCE</replaceable>) to
> -            (<replaceable>TARGET_WCPATH</replaceable>).  See
> +            <replaceable>SOURCE</replaceable> to
> +            <replaceable>TARGET_WCPATH</replaceable>.  See
>              <xref linkend="svn.branchmerge.basicmerging.stayinsync"/>.
>              <quote>Reintegrate</quote> merges merge changes from a
>              feature branch (<replaceable>SOURCE</replaceable>)
> @@ -6354,7 +6355,7 @@
>
>      <refsynopsisdiv>
>        <para><literal>svn switch URL[@PEGREV] [PATH]</literal></para>
> -      <para><literal>switch --relocate FROM TO [PATH...]</literal></para>
> +      <para><literal>svn switch --relocate FROM TO
> [PATH...]</literal></para>
>      </refsynopsisdiv>
>
>      <!-- ===============================================================
> -->
>
>
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