[svnbook] r4078 committed - Read-thru edits....

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Revision: 4078
Author:   cmpilato at gmail.com
Date:     Thu Sep  8 11:48:49 2011
Log:      Read-thru edits.

* en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml
   (svn.advanced.pegrevs): Remove a stray character recently added.
   (svn.advanced.props): Minor tweaks.
   (svn.advanced.sparsedirs, svn.advanced.externals): Tweak wording to
     not imply that 1.6 is the "current" offering.
   (svn.advanced.locking.creation): Update 'svn info' output to
     include 'Repository Root' and 'Working Copy Root Path' items.
   (svn.advanced.locking.discovery): Update 'svn info' output to
     include 'Repository Root' item.

http://code.google.com/p/svnbook/source/detail?r=4078

Modified:
  /trunk/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml

=======================================
--- /trunk/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml	Tue Sep  6 14:02:35 2011
+++ /trunk/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml	Thu Sep  8 11:48:49 2011
@@ -438,7 +438,7 @@
        sorts, and we know <emphasis>exactly</emphasis> where to
        go.</para>

-    <sidebar>
+    <sidebar id="svn.advanced.pegrevs.algorithm">
        <title>The Peg Revision Algorithm</title>

        <para>The Subversion command-line client performs the peg revision
@@ -559,7 +559,7 @@

      <informalexample>
        <screen>
-$ svn cat -r 1 concept/IDEA at BASEs
+$ svn cat -r 1 concept/IDEA at BASE
  svn: E195012: Unable to find repository location for 'concept/IDEA' in  
revision 1
  </screen>
      </informalexample>
@@ -724,7 +724,7 @@

      <para>Subversion has no particular policy regarding the use of
        properties.  It asks only that you do not use property names that
-      begin with the prefix <literal>svn:</literal>.  That's the
+      begin with the prefix <literal>svn:</literal> as that's the
        namespace that it sets aside for its own use.  And Subversion
        does, in fact, use properties—both the versioned and
        unversioned variety.  Certain versioned properties have special
@@ -2704,13 +2704,13 @@

      <para>The original (Subversion 1.5) implementation of shallow
        checkouts was good, but didn't support de-telescoping of working
-      copy items.  Subversion 1.6 remedies this problem.  For example,
+      copy items.  Subversion 1.6 remedied this problem.  For example,
        running <userinput>svn update --set-depth empty</userinput> in
        an infinite-depth working copy will discard everything but the
        topmost directory.<footnote><para>Safely, of course.  As in
        other situations, Subversion will leave on disk any files you've
        modified or which aren't versioned.</para></footnote>  Subversion
-      1.6 also introduces another supported value for
+      1.6 also introduced another supported value for
        the <option>--set-depth</option>
        option: <literal>exclude</literal>.  Using <option>--set-depth
        exclude</option> with <command>svn update</command> will cause
@@ -2750,8 +2750,8 @@
        you won't receive those when you update your working
        copy.</para>

-    <para>With Subversion 1.6, you could take a different approach.
-      First, you'd check out the directory in full.  Then you would
+    <para>Beginning with Subversion 1.6, you can take a different
+      approach.  First, check out the directory in full.  Then
        run <userinput>svn update --set-depth exclude</userinput> on the
        one subdirectory you don't care about.</para>

@@ -3035,7 +3035,9 @@
  $ svn info banana.jpg
  Path: banana.jpg
  Name: banana.jpg
+Working Copy Root Path: /home/harry/project
  URL: http://svn.example.com/repos/project/banana.jpg
+Repository Root: http://svn.example.com/repos/project
  Repository UUID: edb2f264-5ef2-0310-a47a-87b0ce17a8ec
  Revision: 2198
  Node Kind: file
@@ -3201,10 +3203,11 @@

        <informalexample>
          <screen>
-$ svn info http://svn.example.com/repos/project/raisin.jpg
+$ svn info ^/raisin.jpg
  Path: raisin.jpg
  Name: raisin.jpg
  URL: http://svn.example.com/repos/project/raisin.jpg
+Repository Root: http://svn.example.com/repos/project
  Repository UUID: edb2f264-5ef2-0310-a47a-87b0ce17a8ec
  Revision: 105
  Node Kind: file
@@ -3790,8 +3793,8 @@
  </screen>
      </informalexample>

-    <para>Subversion 1.6 brings two more improvements to externals
-      definitions.  First, it adds a quoting and escape mechanism to
+    <para>Subversion 1.6 brought two more improvements to externals
+      definitions.  First, it added a quoting and escape mechanism to
        the syntax so that the path of the external working copy may
        contain whitespace.  This was previously problematic, of course,
        because whitespace is used to delimit the fields in an externals
@@ -3812,7 +3815,7 @@
  </screen>
      </informalexample>

-    <para>Subversion 1.6 also introduces support for external
+    <para>Subversion 1.6 also introduced support for external
        definitions for files.  <firstterm>File externals</firstterm>
        are configured just like externals for directories and appear as
        a versioned file in the working copy.</para>




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