[svnbook] r3950 committed - * src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml...

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Revision: 3950
Author:   cmpilato at gmail.com
Date:     Wed Aug  3 12:33:38 2011
Log:      * src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
   More cleanups based on Quinn's review of my butchering of his patch.

http://code.google.com/p/svnbook/source/detail?r=3950

Modified:
  /trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml

=======================================
--- /trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	Wed Aug  3 11:21:13  
2011
+++ /trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	Wed Aug  3 12:33:38  
2011
@@ -735,9 +735,11 @@

          <para>To configure <command>svnserve</command> as
            a <command>launchd</command> job, first create a job
-          definition file.  See
+          definition file named
+           
<filename>/Library/LaunchDaemons/org.apache.subversion.svnserve.plist</filename>.
            <xref linkend="svn.serverconfig.svnserve.invoking.launchd.ex-1"/>
-          for a sample of such a file.</para>
+          provides an example of such a file—you might consider
+          using it as a template for your own.</para>

          <example id="svn.serverconfig.svnserve.invoking.launchd.ex-1">
            <title>A sample svnserve launchd job definition</title>
@@ -783,14 +785,8 @@
  </programlisting>
          </example>

-        <para>In the examples which follow, we'll assume that
-          our <command>launchd</command> job definition file has been
-          created at
-           
<filename>/Library/LaunchDaemons/org.apache.subversion.svnserve.plist</filename>.</para>
-
          <para>Once your job definition file is created, you can
-          activate the job using the <command>launchctl load</command>
-          command:</para>
+          activate the job using <command>launchctl load</command>:</para>

          <informalexample>
            <screen>
@@ -799,6 +795,13 @@
  </screen>
          </informalexample>

+        <para>To be clear, this action doesn't
+          launch <command>svnserve</command> yet.  It simply tells
+          your system that when incoming networking traffic arrives on
+          the <literal>svn</literal> network port, it should fire up a
+          short-lived instead of <command>svnserve</command> to handle
+          that traffic.</para>
+
          <note>
            <para>Because we want <command>svnserve</command> to be a
              system-wide daemon process, we need to
@@ -810,8 +813,8 @@
              the user who loaded the job.</para>
          </note>

-        <para>Deactivating the job is just as using—use
-          the <command>launchctl unload</command> command:</para>
+        <para>Deactivating the job is just as easy to do—use
+          <command>launchctl unload</command>:</para>

          <informalexample>
            <screen>




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