[svnbook] r3950 committed - * src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml...
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Revision: 3950
Author: cmpilato at gmail.com
Date: Wed Aug 3 12:33:38 2011
Log: * src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
More cleanups based on Quinn's review of my butchering of his patch.
http://code.google.com/p/svnbook/source/detail?r=3950
Modified:
/trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
=======================================
--- /trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml Wed Aug 3 11:21:13
2011
+++ /trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml Wed Aug 3 12:33:38
2011
@@ -735,9 +735,11 @@
<para>To configure <command>svnserve</command> as
a <command>launchd</command> job, first create a job
- definition file. See
+ definition file named
+
<filename>/Library/LaunchDaemons/org.apache.subversion.svnserve.plist</filename>.
<xref linkend="svn.serverconfig.svnserve.invoking.launchd.ex-1"/>
- for a sample of such a file.</para>
+ provides an example of such a file—you might consider
+ using it as a template for your own.</para>
<example id="svn.serverconfig.svnserve.invoking.launchd.ex-1">
<title>A sample svnserve launchd job definition</title>
@@ -783,14 +785,8 @@
</programlisting>
</example>
- <para>In the examples which follow, we'll assume that
- our <command>launchd</command> job definition file has been
- created at
-
<filename>/Library/LaunchDaemons/org.apache.subversion.svnserve.plist</filename>.</para>
-
<para>Once your job definition file is created, you can
- activate the job using the <command>launchctl load</command>
- command:</para>
+ activate the job using <command>launchctl load</command>:</para>
<informalexample>
<screen>
@@ -799,6 +795,13 @@
</screen>
</informalexample>
+ <para>To be clear, this action doesn't
+ launch <command>svnserve</command> yet. It simply tells
+ your system that when incoming networking traffic arrives on
+ the <literal>svn</literal> network port, it should fire up a
+ short-lived instead of <command>svnserve</command> to handle
+ that traffic.</para>
+
<note>
<para>Because we want <command>svnserve</command> to be a
system-wide daemon process, we need to
@@ -810,8 +813,8 @@
the user who loaded the job.</para>
</note>
- <para>Deactivating the job is just as using—use
- the <command>launchctl unload</command> command:</para>
+ <para>Deactivating the job is just as easy to do—use
+ <command>launchctl unload</command>:</para>
<informalexample>
<screen>
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