[svnbook] r3563 commited - * src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml...

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Revision: 3563
Author: stsp at elego.de
Date: Fri Jul 24 08:36:59 2009
Log: * src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml
   (svn.advanced.externals): As usual, uber-feedback by cmpilato.
    Typos, wording fixes, you name it. He shoots them all down!

http://code.google.com/p/svnbook/source/detail?r=3563

Modified:
  /trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml

=======================================
--- /trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml	Mon Jul 20 17:24:09 2009
+++ /trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml	Fri Jul 24 08:36:59 2009
@@ -3057,10 +3057,10 @@
        file in the working copy.</para>

      <para>For example, let's say you had the file
-    <filename>/trunk/bikeshed/blue.html</filename> in your repository,
-    and you wanted this file, as it appeared in revision 40,
-    to appear in your working copy of <filename>/trunk/www/</filename>
-    as <filename>green.html</filename>.</para>
+      <filename>/trunk/bikeshed/blue.html</filename> in your repository,
+      and you wanted this file, as it appeared in revision 40,
+      to appear in your working copy of <filename>/trunk/www/</filename>
+      as <filename>green.html</filename>.</para>

      <para>The externals definition required to achieve this should
        look familiar by now:</para>
@@ -3077,7 +3077,7 @@
      X   www/green.html
  </screen>

-    <para>As you can see in the output above, Subversion denotes file
+    <para>As you can see in the previous output, Subversion denotes file
        externals with the letter <literal>E</literal> when they are
        fetched into the working copy, and with the letter
        <literal>X</literal> when showing the working copy status.</para>
@@ -3126,16 +3126,15 @@
  svn: File '/trunk/bikeshed/blue.html' is out of date
  </screen>

-    <para>Keep this in mind when definining file externals.
+    <para>Keep this in mind when defining file externals.
        If you need the external to refer to a certain revision
        of a file you will not be able to modify the external.
        If you want to be able to modify the external, you cannot
        specify a revision other than the <literal>HEAD</literal>
        revision, which is implied if no revision is specified.</para>

-    <para>Concluding our discussion of externals definitions, it has
-      to be said that the support which exists for externals definitions in
-      Subversion remains less than ideal.  Both file and directory
+    <para>Unfortunately, the support which exists for externals definitions
+      in Subversion remains less than ideal.  Both file and directory
        externals have shortcomings. For either type of external, the
        local subdirectory part of the definition cannot contain
        <literal>..</literal> parent directory indicators (such as




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