[svnbook commit] r3287 - trunk/src/en/book

[cmpilato]

Author: cmpilato
Date: Wed Sep  3 23:38:38 2008
New Revision: 3287

Log:
Minor fixes.  Patch by Øyvind A. Holm <sunny {at} sunbase.org>.

* src/en/book/appc-webdav.xml
  Refer to Adobe as the producer of Dreamweaver instead of Macromedia.

* src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml
  CamelCase "ClearCase".

* src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml,
* src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml
  Minor spelling fixes.

Modified:
   trunk/src/en/book/appc-webdav.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/appc-webdav.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/appc-webdav.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/appc-webdav.xml	Wed Sep  3 23:38:38 2008
@@ -278,7 +278,7 @@
             <entry>Java GUI tool for exploring WebDAV shares</entry>
           </row>
           <row>
-            <entry>Macromedia Dreamweaver</entry>
+            <entry>Adobe Dreamweaver</entry>
             <entry>Standalone WebDAV application</entry>
             <entry>X</entry>
             <entry></entry>
@@ -385,7 +385,7 @@
               some reason, but it exists in the rest of the Office
               suite.</para>
           </footnote>
-          Adobe's Photoshop, and Macromedia's Dreamweaver programs.
+          Adobe's Photoshop and Dreamweaver programs.
           They're able to directly open and save to URLs, and tend to
           make heavy use of WebDAV locks when editing a file.</para>
 

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml	Wed Sep  3 23:38:38 2008
@@ -1089,7 +1089,7 @@
               semi-automated tracking of branching and merging.  This
               was a huge boon for users, and pushed Subversion far
               beyond the abilities of CVS and into the ranks of
-              commercial competitors such as Perforce and Clearcase.
+              commercial competitors such as Perforce and ClearCase.
               Subversion 1.5 also introduced a bevy of other
               user-focused features, such as interactive resolution of
               file conflicts, partial checkouts, client-side

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml	Wed Sep  3 23:38:38 2008
@@ -1691,7 +1691,7 @@
         result, and attempt your commit again.</para>
 
       <para>That covers the basic work cycle for using Subversion.
-        Subversion offerse many other features that you can use
+        Subversion offers many other features that you can use
         to manage your repository and working copy, but most of your
         day-to-day use of Subversion will involve only the commands
         that we've discussed so far in this chapter.  We will,

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml	Wed Sep  3 23:38:38 2008
@@ -3050,7 +3050,7 @@
       definition can point only to directories, not to files.  Also, the
       local subdirectory part of the definition cannot contain
       <literal>..</literal> parent directory indicators (such as
-      <filename>../../skins/myskin</filename>).  Perhap most
+      <filename>../../skins/myskin</filename>).  Perhaps most
       disappointingly, the working copies created via the externals
       definition support are still disconnected from the primary
       working copy (on whose versioned directories the