[svnbook commit] r2994 - trunk/src/en/book

kfogel noreply at red-bean.com
Fri Mar 14 13:07:14 CDT 2008


Author: kfogel
Date: Fri Mar 14 13:07:13 2008
New Revision: 2994

Log:
* src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml
  (Creating a Branch): Tweak to avoid ambiguities wherein it is not
    clear whether references were to the reader's progress through the
    book or their progress through some particular VC task.


Modified:
   trunk/src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml	Fri Mar 14 13:07:13 2008
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
 
     <para>At this point, you should understand how each commit creates
       an entire new filesystem tree (called a <quote>revision</quote>)
-      in the repository.  If not, go back and read about revisions in
+      in the repository.  If you don't, go back and read about revisions in
       <xref linkend="svn.basic.in-action.revs"/>.</para>
 
     <para>For this chapter, we'll go back to the same example from
@@ -166,11 +166,10 @@
         begins its life as a copy of
         <filename>/calc/trunk</filename>.</para>
 
-      <para>At this point, you might have seen <command>svn
-        copy</command> used to copy one file to another within a
-        working copy.  But it can also be used to do
-        a <quote>remote</quote> copy entirely within the repository.
-        Just copy one URL to another:</para>
+      <para>You may already have seen <command>svn copy</command> used
+        to copy one file to another within a working copy.  But it can
+        also be used to do a <quote>remote</quote> copy entirely
+        within the repository.  Just copy one URL to another:</para>
 
       <screen>
 $ svn copy http://svn.example.com/repos/calc/trunk \




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