[svnbook commit] r2994 - trunk/src/en/book
kfogel
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Fri Mar 14 13:07:14 CDT 2008
Author: kfogel
Date: Fri Mar 14 13:07:13 2008
New Revision: 2994
Log:
* src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml
(Creating a Branch): Tweak to avoid ambiguities wherein it is not
clear whether references were to the reader's progress through the
book or their progress through some particular VC task.
Modified:
trunk/src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml
Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml (original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml Fri Mar 14 13:07:13 2008
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
<para>At this point, you should understand how each commit creates
an entire new filesystem tree (called a <quote>revision</quote>)
- in the repository. If not, go back and read about revisions in
+ in the repository. If you don't, go back and read about revisions in
<xref linkend="svn.basic.in-action.revs"/>.</para>
<para>For this chapter, we'll go back to the same example from
@@ -166,11 +166,10 @@
begins its life as a copy of
<filename>/calc/trunk</filename>.</para>
- <para>At this point, you might have seen <command>svn
- copy</command> used to copy one file to another within a
- working copy. But it can also be used to do
- a <quote>remote</quote> copy entirely within the repository.
- Just copy one URL to another:</para>
+ <para>You may already have seen <command>svn copy</command> used
+ to copy one file to another within a working copy. But it can
+ also be used to do a <quote>remote</quote> copy entirely
+ within the repository. Just copy one URL to another:</para>
<screen>
$ svn copy http://svn.example.com/repos/calc/trunk \
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