[svnbook commit] r3261 - trunk/src/en/book

cmpilato noreply at red-bean.com
Fri Aug 8 12:12:30 CDT 2008

Author: cmpilato
Date: Fri Aug  8 12:12:29 2008
New Revision: 3261

* src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
  Re-add periods to a set of list items for consistency with the five
  other similar, neighboring lists.  Also, don't say "CGI software"
  because not all repository browsing software technically uses the CGI


Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	Fri Aug  8 12:12:29 2008
@@ -198,16 +198,16 @@
             <listitem><para>Quick and easy to set
-                up</para></listitem>
+                up.</para></listitem>
             <listitem><para>Network protocol is stateful and
-                noticeably faster than WebDAV</para></listitem>
+                noticeably faster than WebDAV.</para></listitem>
             <listitem><para>No need to create system accounts on
-                server</para></listitem>
+                server.</para></listitem>
             <listitem><para>Password is not passed over the
-                network</para></listitem>
+                network.</para></listitem>
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@
             <listitem><para>No built-in web browsing.  (You'd have to
-                install a separate web server and some CGI software to
+                install a separate web server and repository browsing software to
                 add this.)</para></listitem>

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