[svnbook commit] r3236 - trunk/src/en/book

fitz noreply at red-bean.com
Sun Aug 3 20:47:07 CDT 2008


Author: fitz
Date: Sun Aug  3 20:47:06 2008
New Revision: 3236

Log:
Second round of copyedits for chapter 9, part 1 of 3.

I didn't reflow any of the paragraphs that I edited.  Again.  Srsly.

* src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml: Copyedit.


Modified:
   trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	Sun Aug  3 20:47:06 2008
@@ -16,15 +16,14 @@
     <title>The Subversion Command-Line Client: <command>svn</command></title>
     
     <para>To use the command-line client, type
-      <command>svn</command>, the subcommand you wish to use, and
-      <footnote>
+      <command>svn</command>, the subcommand you wish to use<footnote>
         <para>Well, you don't need a subcommand to use the
           <option>--version</option> option, but we'll get to that in
           just a minute.</para>
-      </footnote>
-      any options or targets that you wish to operate on—there
-      is no specific order that the subcommand and the options must
-      appear in.  For example, all of the following are valid ways to
+      </footnote>,
+      and any options or targets that you wish to operate on—the
+      subcommand and the options need not appear in a specific order.
+      For example, all of the following are valid ways to
       use <command>svn status</command>:</para>
 
     <screen>
@@ -39,7 +38,7 @@
     
     <!-- =============================================================== -->
     <sect2 id="svn.ref.svn.sw">
-      <title><command>svn</command> Options</title> 
+      <title>svn Options</title> 
       
       <para>While Subversion has different options for its
         subcommands, all options exist in a single
@@ -55,7 +54,7 @@
         Subversion 1.5, several of the options which apply to
         all—or nearly all—of the subcommands have been
         deemed acceptable by all subcommands, even if they have no
-        effect upon some of them.  They appear grouped together in the
+        effect on some of them.  They appear grouped together in the
         command-line client's usage messages as global options.  This
         was done to assist folks who write scripts which wrap the
         command-line client.  These global options are as
@@ -90,7 +89,7 @@
               of interactive prompting include requests for
               authentication credentials and conflict resolution
               decisions.  This is useful if you're running Subversion
-              inside of an automated script and it's more appropriate
+              inside an automated script and it's more appropriate
               to have Subversion fail than to prompt for more
               information.</para>
           </listitem>
@@ -129,11 +128,11 @@
           <term><option>--accept</option>
             <replaceable>ACTION</replaceable></term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Specify action for automatic conflict resolution.
+            <para>Specifies an action for automatic conflict resolution.
               Possible actions are <literal>postpone</literal>,
               <literal>base</literal>, <literal>mine-full</literal>,
               <literal>theirs-full</literal>, <literal>edit</literal>, and
-              <literal>launch.</literal></para>
+              <literal>launch</literal>.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
 
@@ -151,7 +150,7 @@
             <replaceable>ARG</replaceable></term>
           <listitem>
             <para>Used as a means to refer to a specific
-              <quote>change</quote> (aka a revision), this option is
+              <quote>change</quote> (a.k.a. a revision).  This option is
               syntactic sugar for <quote>-r ARG-1:ARG</quote>.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
@@ -160,8 +159,8 @@
           <term><option>--changelist</option>
             <replaceable>ARG</replaceable></term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Operate only on members of the changelist named
-              <replaceable>ARG</replaceable>.  This option can be used
+            <para>Instructs Subversion to operate only on members of the changelist named
+              <replaceable>ARG</replaceable>.  You can use this option
               multiple times to specify sets of changelists.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
@@ -170,7 +169,7 @@
           <term><option>--cl</option>
             <replaceable>ARG</replaceable></term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>This is an alias for the
+            <para>An alias for the
               <option>--changelist</option> option.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
@@ -179,7 +178,7 @@
           <term><option>--depth</option>
             <replaceable>ARG</replaceable></term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Limit the scope of an operation to a particular tree
+            <para>Instructs Subversion to limit the scope of an operation to a particular tree
               depth.  <replaceable>ARG</replaceable> is one of
               <literal>empty</literal>, <literal>files</literal>,
               <literal>immediates</literal>, or
@@ -253,8 +252,8 @@
               with the
               <option>--diff-cmd</option> option.
               If you wish to pass multiple
-              arguments, you must enclose all of them in quotes (for
-              example, <userinput>svn diff --diff-cmd /usr/bin/diff -x
+              arguments, you must enclose all of them in quotes (e.g.,
+              <userinput>svn diff --diff-cmd /usr/bin/diff -x
               "-b -E"</userinput>).</para>
           </listitem>
 
@@ -280,8 +279,8 @@
           <term><option>--force</option></term>
           <listitem>
             <para>Forces a particular command or operation to run.
-              There are some operations that Subversion will prevent
-              you from doing in normal usage, but you can pass the
+              Subversion will prevent you from performing some operations
+              in normal usage, but you can pass the
               force option to tell Subversion <quote>I know what I'm
               doing as well as the possible repercussions of doing it,
               so let me at 'em.</quote>  This option is the
@@ -296,7 +295,7 @@
           <listitem>
             <para>Forces a suspicious parameter passed to the
               <option>--message</option> (<option>-m</option>) or
-              <option>--file</option> (<option>-F</option>) options to
+              <option>--file</option> (<option>-F</option>) option to
               be accepted as valid.  By default, Subversion will
               produce an error if parameters to these options look
               like they might instead be targets of the subcommand.
@@ -334,7 +333,7 @@
         <varlistentry>
           <term><option>--ignore-externals</option></term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Tells Subversion to ignore external definitions and
+            <para>Tells Subversion to ignore externals definitions and
               the external working copies managed by them.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
@@ -350,14 +349,14 @@
         <varlistentry>
           <term><option>--keep-changelists</option></term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Don't delete changelists after committing.</para>
+            <para>Tells Subversion onot to delete changelists after committing.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
       
         <varlistentry>
           <term><option>--keep-local</option></term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Keep the local copy of a file or directory (used
+            <para>Keeps the local copy of a file or directory (used
               with the <command>svn delete</command> command).</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
@@ -366,7 +365,7 @@
           <term><option>--limit</option> (<option>-l</option>)
             <replaceable>NUM</replaceable></term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Show only the first <replaceable>NUM</replaceable>
+            <para>Shows only the first <replaceable>NUM</replaceable>
               log messages.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
@@ -430,7 +429,7 @@
         <varlistentry>
           <term><option>--no-unlock</option></term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Don't automatically unlock files (the default commit
+            <para>Tells Subversion not to automatically unlock files (the default commit
               behavior is to unlock all files listed as part of the
               commit).  See <xref linkend="svn.advanced.locking"/> for
               more information.</para>
@@ -451,7 +450,7 @@
         <varlistentry>
           <term><option>--notice-ancestry</option></term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Pay attention to ancestry when calculating 
+            <para>Pays attention to ancestry when calculating 
               differences.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
@@ -467,7 +466,7 @@
         <varlistentry>
           <term><option>--parents</option></term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Create and add nonexistent or nonversioned parent
+            <para>Creates and adds nonexistent or nonversioned parent
               subdirectories to the working copy or repository as part
               of an operation.  This is useful for automatically
               creating multiple subdirectories where none currently
@@ -487,8 +486,8 @@
         <varlistentry>
           <term><option>--record-only</option></term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Mark revisions as merged (for use with
-              <option>--revision</option>)</para>
+            <para>Marks revisions as merged (for use with
+              <option>--revision</option>).</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
         
@@ -529,7 +528,7 @@
           <term><option>--remove</option>
             <replaceable>ARG</replaceable></term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Disassociate <replaceable>ARG</replaceable> from a
+            <para>Disassociates <replaceable>ARG</replaceable> from a
               changelist</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
@@ -575,7 +574,7 @@
           <term><option>--set-depth</option>
             <replaceable>ARG</replaceable></term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Set the sticky depth on a directory in a working
+            <para>Sets the sticky depth on a directory in a working
               copy to one of <literal>empty</literal>,
               <literal>files</literal>, <literal>immediates</literal>,
               or <literal>infinity</literal>.</para>
@@ -639,7 +638,7 @@
           <term><option>--use-merge-history</option>
             (<option>-g</option>)</term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Use or display additional information from merge
+            <para>Uses or displays additional information from merge
               history.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
@@ -659,7 +658,7 @@
           <term><option>--version</option></term>
           <listitem>
             <para>Prints the client version info.  This information
-              not only includes the version number of the client, but
+              includes not only the version number of the client, but
               also a listing of all repository access modules that the
               client can use to access a Subversion repository.
               With <option>--quiet</option> (<option>-q</option>) it
@@ -670,8 +669,8 @@
         <varlistentry>
           <term><option>--with-all-revprops</option></term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Used with the <option>--xml</option> option to <command>svn log</command>, this
-            causes <command>svn</command> to retrieve and display all revision
+            <para>Used with the <option>--xml</option> option to <command>svn log</command>,
+            will retrieve and display all revision
             properties in the log output.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
@@ -681,7 +680,7 @@
             <replaceable>ARG</replaceable></term>
           <listitem>
             <para>When used with any command that writes to the
-              repository, this sets the revision property, using the
+              repository, sets the revision property, using the
               <replaceable>NAME=VALUE</replaceable> format,
               <replaceable>NAME</replaceable> to
               <replaceable>VALUE</replaceable>.  When used with
@@ -703,7 +702,7 @@
     
     <!-- =============================================================== -->
     <sect2 id="svn.ref.svn.c">
-      <title><command>svn</command> Subcommands</title>
+      <title>svn Subcommands</title>
 
       <para>Here are the various subcommands.  For the sake of
         brevity, we omit the global options (described in <xref
@@ -740,17 +739,17 @@
         </refsect1>
         
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>None</para>
         </refsect1>
         
         <refsect1>
           <title>Changes</title>
-          <para>Working Copy</para>
+          <para>Working copy</para>
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>No</para>
         </refsect1>
         
@@ -803,7 +802,7 @@
             will skip over any directories that are already under
             version control.  Sometimes, however, you may want to add
             every unversioned object in your working copy, including
-            those hiding deeper down.  Passing the
+            those hiding deeper.  Passing the
             <option>--force</option> option makes <command>svn
             add</command> recurse into versioned directories:
           </para>
@@ -846,7 +845,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para><command>praise</command>, <command>annotate</command>, <command>ann</command></para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -856,7 +855,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Yes</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -905,7 +904,7 @@
         <refsect1>
           <title>Examples</title>
 
-          <para>If you want to see blame annotated source for
+          <para>If you want to see blame-annotated source for
             <filename>readme.txt</filename> in your test
             repository:</para>
           <screen>
@@ -919,11 +918,11 @@
             5, you'll have to examine exactly what the revision
             changed to be sure that Harry changed
             the <emphasis>context</emphasis> of the line—he may
-            have just adjusted the whitespace.
+            have adjusted just the whitespace.
           </para>
 
           <para>If you use the <option>--xml</option> option, you can
-            get xml output describing the blame annotations, but not
+            get XML output describing the blame annotations, but not
             the contents of the lines themselves:</para>
 
           <screen>
@@ -977,11 +976,11 @@
           
           <para>Output the contents of the specified files or URLs.
             For listing the contents of directories, see <command>svn
-            list</command> later.</para>
+            list</command> later in this chapter.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>None</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -991,7 +990,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Yes</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -1004,7 +1003,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Example</title>
+          <title>Examples</title>
 
           <para>If you want to view <filename>readme.txt</filename> in
             your repository without checking it out:</para>
@@ -1064,7 +1063,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Name</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para><command>cl</command></para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -1074,7 +1073,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>No</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -1161,17 +1160,17 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Name</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para><command>co</command></para>
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
           <title>Changes</title>
-          <para>Creates a working copy.</para>
+          <para>Creates a working copy</para>
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Yes</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -1288,7 +1287,7 @@
 
         <refnamediv>
           <refname>svn cleanup</refname>
-          <refpurpose>Recursively clean up the working copy.</refpurpose>
+          <refpurpose>Recursively clean up the working copy</refpurpose>
         </refnamediv>
         <refsect1>
           <title>Synopsis</title>
@@ -1315,7 +1314,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>None</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -1325,7 +1324,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>No</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -1339,12 +1338,12 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Example</title>
+          <title>Examples</title>
 
           <para>Well, there's not much to the examples here, as
             <command>svn cleanup</command> generates no output.  If
             you pass no <replaceable>PATH</replaceable>, then
-            <quote><filename>.</filename></quote> is used.</para>
+            <quote><filename>.</filename></quote> is used:</para>
 
           <screen>
 $ svn cleanup
@@ -1380,12 +1379,12 @@
             <option>--message</option> option,
             <command>svn</command> will launch your editor for you
             to compose a commit message.  See the
-            <literal>editor-cmd</literal> section in <xref
+            <literal>editor-cmd</literal> list entry in <xref
             linkend="svn.advanced.confarea.opts.config"/>.</para>
 
           <para><command>svn commit</command> will send any lock
             tokens that it finds and will release locks on all
-            <replaceable>PATHS</replaceable> committed (recursively)
+            <replaceable>PATH</replaceable>s committed (recursively)
             unless <option>--no-unlock</option> is passed.</para>
 
           <tip>
@@ -1403,7 +1402,7 @@
 
         
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Name</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para><command>ci</command> (short for <quote>check in</quote>; not 
             <command>co</command>, which is an alias for the 
             <command>checkout</command> subcommand)</para>
@@ -1415,7 +1414,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Yes</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -1456,7 +1455,7 @@
           <para>Commit a modification to the file
             <filename>foo.c</filename> (explicitly specified on the
             command line) with the commit message in a file named
-            <literal>msg</literal>:</para>
+            <filename>msg</filename>:</para>
 
           <screen>
 $ svn commit -F msg foo.c
@@ -1517,7 +1516,7 @@
           
           <para>Copy one or more files in a working copy or in the
             repository.  When copying multiple sources, they will be
-            added as children of DST, which must be a directory.
+            added as children of <replaceable>DST</replaceable>, which must be a directory.
             <replaceable>SRC</replaceable> and
             <replaceable>DST</replaceable> can each be either a
             working copy (WC) path or URL:</para>
@@ -1562,7 +1561,7 @@
             a directory.</para>
 
           <para>If no peg revision (i.e.,
-            <replaceable>@REV</replaceable>) is supplied, by default,
+            <replaceable>@REV</replaceable>) is supplied, by default
             the <literal>BASE</literal> revision will be used for
             files copied from the working copy, while the
             <literal>HEAD</literal> revision will be used for files
@@ -1576,18 +1575,17 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Name</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para><command>cp</command></para>
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
           <title>Changes</title>
-          <para>Repository if destination is a URL.</para>
-          <para>Working copy if destination is a WC path.</para>
+          <para>Repository if destination is a URL; working copy if destination is a WC path</para>
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Yes, if source or destination is in the repository, or if needed
             to look up the source revision number.</para>
         </refsect1>
@@ -1611,7 +1609,7 @@
         <refsect1>
           <title>Examples</title>
 
-          <para>Copy an item within your working copy (just
+          <para>Copy an item within your working copy (this
             schedules the copy—nothing goes into the repository
             until you commit):</para>
 
@@ -1632,7 +1630,7 @@
 A         src/qux.c
 </screen>
 
-          <para>Copy revision 8 of <literal>bat.c</literal> into your
+          <para>Copy revision 8 of <filename>bat.c</filename> into your
             working copy under a different name:</para>
 
           <screen>
@@ -1641,7 +1639,7 @@
 </screen>
 
           <para>Copy an item in your working copy to a URL in the
-            repository (an immediate commit, so you must supply a
+            repository (this is an immediate commit, so you must supply a
             commit message):</para>
 
           <screen>
@@ -1651,7 +1649,7 @@
 </screen>
 
           <para>Copy an item from the repository to your working
-            copy (just schedules the copy—nothing goes into the
+            copy (this just schedules the copy—nothing goes into the
             repository until you commit):</para>
  
           <screen>
@@ -1684,7 +1682,7 @@
             <para>This is the easiest way to <quote>tag</quote> a
               revision in your repository—just <command>svn
               copy</command> that revision (usually
-              <literal>HEAD</literal>) into your tags directory.</para>
+              <literal>HEAD</literal>) into your <filename>tags</filename> directory.</para>
           </tip>
 
           <para>And don't worry if you forgot to tag—you can
@@ -1736,8 +1734,8 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
-          <para>del, remove, rm</para>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
+          <para><command>del</command>, <command>remove</command>, <command>rm</command></para>
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
@@ -1747,7 +1745,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Only if operating on URLs</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -1823,7 +1821,7 @@
 
         <refnamediv>
           <refname>svn diff</refname>
-          <refpurpose>Display the differences between two revisions or paths.</refpurpose>
+          <refpurpose>This displays the differences between two revisions or paths.</refpurpose>
         </refnamediv>
         <refsect1>
           <title>Synopsis</title>
@@ -1843,7 +1841,7 @@
             </listitem>
 
             <listitem>
-              <para>Use just <command>svn diff</command>to display local
+              <para>Use just <command>svn diff</command> to display local
                 modifications in a working copy.</para>
             </listitem>
 
@@ -1884,7 +1882,7 @@
                 <replaceable>OLD-TGT</replaceable> if not specified.
                 <literal>-r N</literal>
                 makes <replaceable>OLDREV</replaceable> default to
-                N; <literal>-r N:M</literal>
+                <literal>N</literal>; <literal>-r N:M</literal>
                 makes <replaceable>OLDREV</replaceable> default to
                 <replaceable>N</replaceable> and
                 <replaceable>NEWREV</replaceable> default to
@@ -1907,12 +1905,12 @@
             N[:M]] --old=URL1 --new=URL2</command>.</para>
 
           <para>If <replaceable>TARGET</replaceable> is a URL, then
-            revs N and M can be given either via the
+            revs <literal>N</literal> and <literal>M</literal> can be given either via the
             <option>--revision</option> option or by using the
             <quote>@</quote> notation as described earlier.</para>
 
           <para>If <replaceable>TARGET</replaceable> is a working copy
-            path, then the <option>--revision</option> option
+            path, the <option>--revision</option> option
             means:</para>
 
           <variablelist>
@@ -1932,7 +1930,7 @@
               <listitem>
                 <para>The client compares
                   <replaceable>TARGET at N</replaceable>
-                  against working copy.</para>
+                  against the working copy.</para>
               </listitem>
             </varlistentry>
 
@@ -1950,9 +1948,9 @@
             <replaceable>URL1</replaceable> and
             <replaceable>URL2</replaceable> at revisions
             <replaceable>N</replaceable> and
-            <replaceable>M</replaceable> respectively.  If either
+            <replaceable>M</replaceable>, respectively.  If either
             <replaceable>N</replaceable> or
-            <replaceable>M</replaceable> are omitted, a value of
+            <replaceable>M</replaceable> is omitted, a value of
             <literal>HEAD</literal> is assumed.</para>
 
           <para>By default, <command>svn diff</command> ignores the
@@ -1960,14 +1958,14 @@
             two files being compared.  If you use
             <option>--notice-ancestry</option>, the ancestry of the
             paths in question will be taken into consideration when
-            comparing revisions (that is, if you run <command>svn
+            comparing revisions (i.e., if you run <command>svn
             diff</command> on two files with identical contents but
             different ancestry, you will see the entire contents of
             the file as having been removed and added again).</para>
 
         </refsect1>
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Name</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para><command>di</command></para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -1977,7 +1975,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>For obtaining differences against anything but
             <literal>BASE</literal> revision in your working copy</para>
         </refsect1>
@@ -2018,7 +2016,7 @@
 </screen>
 
           <para>See what changed in the file
-            <literal>COMMITTERS</literal> revision 9115:</para>
+            <filename>COMMITTERS</filename> revision 9115:</para>
 
           <screen>
 $ svn diff -c 9115 COMMITTERS 
@@ -2110,7 +2108,7 @@
 
           <para>Lastly, you can use the <option>--xml</option> option
             along with the <option>--summarize</option> option to view
-            xml describing the changes that occurred between
+            XML describing the changes that occurred between
             revisions, but not the contents of the diff itself:</para>
           
           <screen>
@@ -2159,8 +2157,8 @@
           <title>Description</title>
 
           <para>The first form exports a clean directory tree from the
-            repository specified by URL—at revision
-            <replaceable>REV</replaceable> if it is given, otherwise
+            repository specified by <replaceable>URL</replaceable>—at revision
+            <replaceable>REV</replaceable> if it is given; otherwise,
             at <literal>HEAD</literal>, into
             <replaceable>PATH</replaceable>.  If
             <replaceable>PATH</replaceable> is omitted, the last
@@ -2176,7 +2174,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>None</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -2186,7 +2184,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Only if exporting from a URL</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -2225,14 +2223,14 @@
 Exported revision 15.
 </screen>
 
-          <para>When rolling operating system-specific release
+          <para>When rolling operating-system-specific release
             packages, it can be useful to export a tree that uses a
             specific EOL character for line endings.  The
             <option>--native-eol</option> option will do this, but it
             affects only files that have <literal>svn:eol-style =
             native</literal> properties attached to them.  For
             example, to export a tree with all CRLF line endings
-            (possibly for a Windows <literal>.zip</literal> file
+            (possibly for a Windows <filename>.zip</filename> file
             distribution):</para>
 
           <screen>
@@ -2277,8 +2275,8 @@
         </refsect1>
         
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
-          <para>?, h</para>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
+          <para><command>?</command>, <command>h</command></para>
           <para>The options <option>-?</option>, <option>-h</option>,
             and <option>--help</option> have the same effect as using the
             <command>help</command> subcommand.</para>
@@ -2290,7 +2288,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>No</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -2334,7 +2332,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>None</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -2344,7 +2342,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Yes</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -2468,7 +2466,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>None</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -2478,7 +2476,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Only if operating on URLs</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -2564,7 +2562,7 @@
 </screen>
 
            <para>Lastly, <command>svn info</command> output is
-             available in xml format by passing
+             available in XML format by passing
              the<option>--xml</option> option:</para>
 
            <screen>
@@ -2636,7 +2634,7 @@
 
             <listitem><para>Author of the last commit</para></listitem>
 
-            <listitem><para>If locked, the letter <quote>O</quote> (See <xref
+            <listitem><para>If locked, the letter <quote>O</quote> (see the preceding section on <xref
               linkend="svn.ref.svn.c.info"/> for details).</para></listitem>
 
             <listitem><para>Size (in bytes)</para></listitem>
@@ -2653,8 +2651,8 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
-          <para>ls</para>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
+          <para><command>ls</command></para>
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
@@ -2663,7 +2661,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Yes</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -2707,7 +2705,7 @@
 </screen>
 
           <para>You can also get <command>svn list</command> output in
-            xml format with the <option>--xml</option> option:</para>
+            XML format with the <option>--xml</option> option:</para>
 
           <screen>
 $ svn list --xml http://svn.red-bean.com/repos/test
@@ -2748,7 +2746,7 @@
         <refnamediv>
           <refname>svn lock</refname> 
             <refpurpose>Lock working copy paths or URLs in the
-              repository, so that no other user can commit changes to
+              repository so that no other user can commit changes to
               them.</refpurpose>
         </refnamediv>
         <refsect1>
@@ -2768,7 +2766,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>None</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -2778,7 +2776,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Yes</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -2855,14 +2853,14 @@
           <para>Shows log messages from the repository.
             If no arguments are supplied, <command>svn
             log</command> shows the log messages for all files and
-            directories inside of (and including) the current working
+            directories inside (and including) the current working
             directory of your working copy.  You can refine the
             results by specifying a path, one or more revisions, or
             any combination of the two.  The default revision range
             for a local path is <literal>BASE:1</literal>.</para>
 
-          <para>If you specify a URL alone, then it prints log
-            messages for everything that the URL contains.  If you
+          <para>If you specify a URL alone, it prints log
+            messages for everything the URL contains.  If you
             add paths past the URL, only messages for those paths
             under that URL will be printed.  The default revision range
             for a URL is <literal>HEAD:1</literal>.</para>
@@ -2882,7 +2880,7 @@
 
         </refsect1>
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>None</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -2892,7 +2890,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Yes</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3218,7 +3216,7 @@
 
         </refsect1>
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>None</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3228,7 +3226,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Only if working with URLs</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3322,7 +3320,7 @@
 
         </refsect1>
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>None</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3332,7 +3330,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Yes</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3396,7 +3394,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>None</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3406,7 +3404,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Only if operating on a URL</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3507,7 +3505,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>mv, rename, ren</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3517,7 +3515,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Only if operating on a URL</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3604,7 +3602,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>pdel, pd</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3614,7 +3612,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Only if operating on a URL</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3683,7 +3681,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>pedit, pe</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3693,7 +3691,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Only if operating on a URL</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3761,7 +3759,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>pget, pg</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3771,7 +3769,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Only if operating on a URL</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3858,7 +3856,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>plist, pl</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3868,7 +3866,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Only if operating on a URL</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3971,7 +3969,7 @@
 
         </refsect1>
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>pset, ps</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -3981,7 +3979,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Only if operating on a URL</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -4151,7 +4149,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>None</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -4161,7 +4159,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>No</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -4237,7 +4235,7 @@
             resolving conflicts.</para> </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>None</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -4247,7 +4245,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>No</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -4326,7 +4324,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>None</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -4336,7 +4334,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>No</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -4727,7 +4725,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>stat, st</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -4737,7 +4735,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Only if using <option>--show-updates</option></para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -4919,7 +4917,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Name</title>
+          <title>Alternate name</title>
           <para>sw</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -4929,7 +4927,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Yes</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -5078,7 +5076,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>None</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -5088,7 +5086,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Yes</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -5239,7 +5237,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Name</title>
+          <title>Alternate name</title>
           <para><command>up</command></para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -5249,7 +5247,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Accesses Repository</title>
+          <title>Accesses repository</title>
           <para>Yes</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -5791,7 +5789,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>?, h</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -7108,7 +7106,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>?, h</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -7353,7 +7351,7 @@
           </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>pg, pget</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -7408,7 +7406,7 @@
           </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Names</title>
+          <title>Alternate names</title>
           <para>pl, plist</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -7763,7 +7761,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Name</title>
+          <title>Alternate name</title>
           <para>None</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -7825,7 +7823,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Name</title>
+          <title>Alternate name</title>
           <para>None</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -7868,7 +7866,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Name</title>
+          <title>Alternate name</title>
           <para>init</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -7951,7 +7949,7 @@
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
-          <title>Alternate Name</title>
+          <title>Alternate name</title>
           <para>sync</para>
         </refsect1>
 




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