[svnbook commit] r3039 - trunk/src/en/book

[cmpilato]

Author: cmpilato
Date: Tue Apr 22 09:54:02 2008
New Revision: 3039

Log:
Fix a few typos and usages.

* ch03-advanced-topics.xml
  Change "switch" to "option"; remove hyphen from "multiline" per O'Reilly
  word list.

* ch07-customizing-svn.xml
  Remove hyphen from "multiline".

* ch09-reference.xml
  Fix various typos; note --diff-copy-from option to 'svnlook diff'
  and --full-paths option to 'svnlook tree'; another "multiline" fix.

Patch by: Larry Shatzer <larrys {at} gmail.com>

Modified:
   trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch07-customizing-svn.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml	Tue Apr 22 09:54:02 2008
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
       <para>The Subversion client understands a number of revision
         keywords.  These keywords can be used instead of integer
         arguments to the <option>--revision</option>
-        (<option>-r</option>) switch, and are resolved into specific
+        (<option>-r</option>) option, and are resolved into specific
         revision numbers by Subversion:</para>
 
       <variablelist>
@@ -475,7 +475,7 @@
        
       <para>But we've been touting the flexibility that Subversion
         offers for your property values.  And if you are planning to
-        have a multi-line textual, or even binary, property value, you
+        have a multiline textual, or even binary, property value, you
         probably do not want to supply that value on the command line.
         So the <command>propset</command> subcommand takes a
         <option>--file</option> (<option>-F</option>) option for

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch07-customizing-svn.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch07-customizing-svn.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch07-customizing-svn.xml	Tue Apr 22 09:54:02 2008
@@ -991,7 +991,7 @@
       (<option>-m</option>) to provide a log message on the command
       line.  Unfortunately, it can be tricky to compose anything more
       than a simple one-line message on the command line.  Users want
-      more flexibility—multi-line, free-form log message editing
+      more flexibility—multiline, free-form log message editing
       on demand.</para>
       
     <para>Subversion supports this by allowing you to specify an

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	Tue Apr 22 09:54:02 2008
@@ -638,7 +638,7 @@
             <replaceable>ARG</replaceable></term>
           <listitem>
             <para>When used with any command that writes to the
-              repository, set the revision property, using thn
+              repository, set the revision property, using the
               <replaceable>NAME=VALUE</replaceable> format,
               <replaceable>NAME</replaceable> to
               <replaceable>VALUE</replaceable>.  When used with
@@ -1504,7 +1504,7 @@
             children of <replaceable>DST</replaceable>, which must be
             a directory.</para>
 
-          <para>If no peg revision (ie
+          <para>If no peg revision (i.e.
             <replaceable>@REV</replaceable>) is supplied, by default
             the <literal>BASE</literal> revision will be used for
             files copied from the working copy, while the
@@ -1810,7 +1810,7 @@
           <para>Display the differences between
             <replaceable>OLD-TGT</replaceable> as it was seen in
             <replaceable>OLDREV</replaceable> and
-            <replaceable>NEW-TGT</replaceable> as it was seen ain
+            <replaceable>NEW-TGT</replaceable> as it was seen in
             <replaceable>NEWREV</replaceable>.
             <replaceable>PATH</replaceable>s, if given, are relative
             to <replaceable>OLD-TGT</replaceable> and
@@ -6365,6 +6365,7 @@
 --transaction (-t)
 --no-diff-added
 --no-diff-deleted
+--diff-copy-from
 </screen>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -6848,6 +6849,7 @@
 --revision (-r) REV
 --transaction (-t)
 --show-ids
+--full-paths
 </screen>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -8004,11 +8006,10 @@
           <term><literal>svn:externals</literal></term>
           <listitem>
 
-            <para>If present on a directory, the value is a
-              multi-line list of other paths and URLs the client
-              should check out.  See
-              <xref
-              linkend="svn.advanced.externals"/>.</para>
+            <para>If present on a directory, the value is a multiline
+              list of other paths and URLs the client should check
+              out.  See
+              <xref linkend="svn.advanced.externals"/>.</para>
 
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>