[svnbook commit] r2664 - in trunk/src/en: . book

cmpilato noreply at red-bean.com
Wed Feb 7 01:35:43 CST 2007

Author: cmpilato
Date: Wed Feb  7 01:35:43 2007
New Revision: 2664


* src/en/book/ch-preface.xml
  Fill in the boilerplate how-to-give-feedback stuff.

* src/en/TODO
  Remove item.

Modified: trunk/src/en/TODO
--- trunk/src/en/TODO	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/TODO	Wed Feb  7 01:35:43 2007
@@ -16,10 +16,6 @@
     Since it is attempting to demonstrate proper Subversion pool coding style,
     it ought to be using SVN_ERR() and svn_error_t everywhere.  Might also
     want to use APR_ARRAY_PUSH().
-  * Fill in the "### boilerplate" stuff we left for O'Reilly.  No
-    reason for the book, printed or otherwise, to not include
-    information about feeding bugs back into the svnbook OS community.
   * (perhaps) suggest the use of environment variables to represent
     long repository URLs.  useful for lots of branching/tagging commands.

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch-preface.xml
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch-preface.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch-preface.xml	Wed Feb  7 01:35:43 2007
@@ -402,8 +402,8 @@
       Subversion project developers, which were then coalesced into a
       single work and rewritten.  As such, it has always been under a
       free license.  (See <xref linkend="svn.copyright"/>.)  In fact,
-      the book was written in the public eye, as a part of Subversion.
-      This means two things:</para>
+      the book was written in the public eye, originally as a part of
+      Subversion project itself.  This means two things:</para>
@@ -421,13 +421,16 @@
-    <!-- O'Reilly Hardcopy Only
-    <para>You can send publishing comments and questions to O'Reilly
-      here: <remark>###insert boilerplate.</remark></para>
-    -->
-    <para>A relatively recent online version of this book can be found
-      at <ulink url="http://svnbook.red-bean.com"/>.</para>
+    <para>The online home of this book's development and most of the
+      volunteer-driven translation efforts around it is <ulink
+      url="http://svnbook.red-bean.com"/>.  There, you can find links
+      to the latest snapshots and tagged versions of the book in
+      various formats, as well as instructions for accessing the
+      book's Subversion repository (where lives its DocBook XML source
+      code).  Feedback is welcome—encouraged, even.  Please
+      submit all comments, complaints, and patches against the book
+      sources to <email>svnbook-dev at red-bean.com</email>.</para>

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