[svnbook commit] r2848 - trunk/src/en/book

[sussman]

Author: sussman
Date: Tue Aug 14 09:34:10 2007
New Revision: 2848

Log:
Minor fixes suggested by cmpilato.

Modified:
   trunk/src/en/book/appc-webdav.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/appc-webdav.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/appc-webdav.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/appc-webdav.xml	Tue Aug 14 09:34:10 2007
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
       technical users appreciate network file-sharing), version
       control features aren't interesting or necessary for most users.
       Finally, some have argued that DeltaV remains unpopular because
-      there's still no well-known open-source server product which
+      there's still no open-source server product which
       implements it well.</para>
 
     <para>When Subversion was still in its design phase, it seemed

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml	Tue Aug 14 09:34:10 2007
@@ -792,7 +792,7 @@
 </screen>
 
         <para>This is the <quote>long form</quote> output of
-          <command>svn status</command>.  The leters in the first
+          <command>svn status</command>.  The letters in the first
           column mean the same as before, but the second column shows
           the working-revision of the item.  The third and fourth
           columns show the revision in which the item last changed,

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml	Tue Aug 14 09:34:10 2007
@@ -2594,7 +2594,7 @@
       to give the project a name.
       <footnote>
         <para><quote>You're not supposed to name it.  Once you name it,
-          you start getting attached to it.</quote>—Mike
+          you start getting attached to it.</quote>— Mike
           Wazowski</para>
       </footnote>
       Let's say you called your software Frabnaggilywort.  At this

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml	Tue Aug 14 09:34:10 2007
@@ -823,8 +823,8 @@
       <sect3 id="svn.branchmerge.copychanges.bestprac.preview">
         <title>Previewing Merges</title>
 
-        <para>First: always remember to do your merge into a working
-          copy that has <emphasis>no</emphasis> local edits, and has
+        <para>First, always remember to do your merge into a working
+          copy that has <emphasis>no</emphasis> local edits and has
           been recently updated.  If your working copy
           isn't <quote>clean</quote> in these ways, you can run into
           some headaches.</para>

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	Tue Aug 14 09:34:10 2007
@@ -647,7 +647,7 @@
 
         <para>Also note that the word <literal>binpath</literal> is
           misleading—its value is a <emphasis>command
-          line</emphasis>, not the path to an executable; that's why
+          line</emphasis>, not the path to an executable.  That's why
           you need to surround it with quote marks if it contains
           embedded spaces.</para>