[svnbook commit] r2051 - trunk/src/en/book

[maxb]

Author: maxb
Date: Tue Mar  7 17:00:39 2006
New Revision: 2051

Modified:
   trunk/src/en/book/ch08.xml

Log:
* en/book/ch08.xml: Tweak some phrasing to more accurately reflect reality.


Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch08.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch08.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch08.xml	Tue Mar  7 17:00:39 2006
@@ -140,13 +140,13 @@
       this.</para>
 
     <para>The client itself also highlights modularity in the
-      Subversion design.  While Subversion currently comes with only a
-      command-line client program, there are already a few other
-      programs being developed by third parties to act as GUIs for
-      Subversion.  Again, these GUIs use the same APIs that the stock
-      command-line client does.  Subversion's libsvn_client library is
-      the one-stop shop for most of the functionality necessary for
-      designing a working Subversion client (see <xref
+      Subversion design.  While Subversion itself comes with only a
+      command-line client program, there are several third party
+      programs which provide various forms of client GUI.  These GUIs
+      use the same APIs that the stock command-line client does.
+      Subversion's libsvn_client library is the one-stop shop for most
+      of the functionality necessary for designing a working
+      Subversion client (see <xref
       linkend="svn.developer.layerlib.client"/>).</para>
 
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