[svnbook commit] r2576 - in branches/ora-2e-reorg/src: en en/book tools

cmpilato noreply at red-bean.com
Thu Dec 21 00:01:51 CST 2006


Author: cmpilato
Date: Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
New Revision: 2576

Modified:
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/Makefile
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/README
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/app-quickstart.xml
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/app-svn-for-cvs-users.xml
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/app-third-party-tools.xml
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/app-webdav.xml
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/book.xml
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-advanced-topics.xml
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-basic-usage.xml
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-branching-and-merging.xml
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-customizing-svn.xml
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-developer-info.xml
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-fundamental-concepts.xml
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-preface.xml
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-reference.xml
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-repository-admin.xml
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-server-configuration.xml
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/copyright.xml
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/foreword.xml
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/styles.css
   branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/tools/Makefile.base-rules

Log:
Branch: ora-2e-reorg

Upgrade the book sources to DocBook 4.4 (from DocBook Lite).  We are,
of course, not making use of the full DTD, but we certainly can.

* src/en/book/app-quickstart.xml
* src/en/book/app-svn-for-cvs-users.xml
* src/en/book/app-third-party-tools.xml
* src/en/book/app-webdav.xml
* src/en/book/ch-advanced-topics.xml
* src/en/book/ch-basic-usage.xml
* src/en/book/ch-branching-and-merging.xml
* src/en/book/ch-customizing-svn.xml
* src/en/book/ch-developer-info.xml
* src/en/book/ch-fundamental-concepts.xml
* src/en/book/ch-preface.xml
* src/en/book/ch-reference.xml
* src/en/book/ch-repository-admin.xml
* src/en/book/ch-server-configuration.xml
* src/en/book/copyright.xml
* src/en/book/foreword.xml
  Minor, mostly-non-content tweaks for DocBook 4.4 compliance.

* src/en/book/book.xml
  Tweak this for DocBook 4.4 compliance.  Update the edition and
  editor blobs, and unset the ISBN number.

* src/tools/Makefile.base-rules
  (version): Reduce the svn.version entity definition to *just* the
    output from svnversion.  Add new svn.l10n_revision and svn.date
    entity definitions.
 
* src/en/Makefile
  (L10N_REVISION): Override the default value of "Revision" with just "r".

* src/en/README
  Note the fact that we are using DocBook 4.4 instead of DocBook Lite,
  and provide a URL to an online reference.

* src/en/book/styles.css
  Fix the way authors and publication dates are rendered.


Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/Makefile
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/Makefile	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/Makefile	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -1 +1,2 @@
 include ../tools/Makefile.base
+L10N_REVISION = r

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/README
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/README	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/README	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -1,8 +1,7 @@
 HOW-TO:  Compiling the Subversion Book
 ======================================
 
-This Subversion Book is written in DocBook Lite, a scaled-down version
-of the DocBook DTD, used by O'Reilly & Associates.
+This Subversion Book is written in DocBook 4.4.
 
 The goal of this document is to give simple instructions to anyone who
 wants to compile this book into a useful format, like HTML or PDF.  It
@@ -173,8 +172,7 @@
       $ make valid
 
 
-3. Read about the DocBook lite tags.
+3. Read about DocBook.
 
-   The tools area contains the readme-dblite.html file which describes
-   how to write with DocBook Lite.  Familiarize yourself with these
-   tags before changing the docs.
+   You'll want to get real intimate with a DocBook reference, such as
+   can be found at:  http://www.docbook.org/tdg/en/html/index.html
\ No newline at end of file

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/app-quickstart.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/app-quickstart.xml	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/app-quickstart.xml	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -2,23 +2,21 @@
 
   <title>Subversion Quick-Start Guide</title>
 
-  <simplesect>
 
-    <para>Some people have trouble absorbing a new technology by
-      reading the sort of <quote>top down</quote> approach provided by
-      this book.  This appendix contains a very short introduction to
-      Subversion, and is designed to give <quote>bottom up</quote>
-      learners a fighting chance.  If you prefer to learn by
-      experimentation, the following demonstration will get you up and
-      running.  Along the way, we give links to the relevant chapters
-      of this book.</para>
-
-    <para>If you're new to the entire concept of version control or to
-      the <quote>copy-modify-merge</quote> model used by both CVS and
-      Subversion, then you should read <xref linkend="svn.basic"/>
-      before going any further.</para>
+  <para>Some people have trouble absorbing a new technology by
+    reading the sort of <quote>top down</quote> approach provided by
+    this book.  This appendix contains a very short introduction to
+    Subversion, and is designed to give <quote>bottom up</quote>
+    learners a fighting chance.  If you prefer to learn by
+    experimentation, the following demonstration will get you up and
+    running.  Along the way, we give links to the relevant chapters
+    of this book.</para>
+
+  <para>If you're new to the entire concept of version control or to
+    the <quote>copy-modify-merge</quote> model used by both CVS and
+    Subversion, then you should read <xref linkend="svn.basic"/>
+    before going any further.</para>
 
-  </simplesect>
 
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
   <!-- ================================================================= -->

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/app-svn-for-cvs-users.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/app-svn-for-cvs-users.xml	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/app-svn-for-cvs-users.xml	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -1,22 +1,19 @@
 <appendix id="svn.forcvs">
   <title>Subversion for CVS Users</title>
 
-  <simplesect>
+  <para>This appendix is a guide for CVS users new to Subversion.
+    It's essentially a list of differences between the two systems
+    as <quote>viewed from 10,000 feet</quote>.  For each section, we
+    provide backreferences to relevant chapters when
+    possible.</para>
+
+  <para>Although the goal of Subversion is to take over the current
+    and future CVS user base, some new features and design changes
+    were required to fix certain <quote>broken</quote> behaviors
+    that CVS had.  This means that, as a CVS user, you may need to
+    break habits—ones that you forgot were odd to begin
+    with.</para>
 
-    <para>This appendix is a guide for CVS users new to Subversion.
-      It's essentially a list of differences between the two systems
-      as <quote>viewed from 10,000 feet</quote>.  For each section, we
-      provide backreferences to relevant chapters when
-      possible.</para>
-
-    <para>Although the goal of Subversion is to take over the current
-      and future CVS user base, some new features and design changes
-      were required to fix certain <quote>broken</quote> behaviors
-      that CVS had.  This means that, as a CVS user, you may need to
-      break habits—ones that you forgot were odd to begin
-      with.</para>
-
-  </simplesect>
 
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
   <!-- ================================================================= -->

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/app-third-party-tools.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/app-third-party-tools.xml	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/app-third-party-tools.xml	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -1,19 +1,15 @@
 <appendix id="svn.3rdparty">
   <title>Third Party Tools</title>
 
-  <simplesect>
-
-    <para>Subversion's modular design (covered in <xref
-      linkend="svn.developer.layerlib"/>) and the availability of
-      language bindings (as described in <xref
-      linkend="svn.developer.usingapi.otherlangs"/>) make it a likely
-      candidate for use as an extension or backend to other pieces of
-      software.  For a listing of many third-party tools that are using
-      Subversion functionality under-the-hood, check out the Links page on the
-      Subversion website (<ulink
-        url="http://subversion.tigris.org/project_links.html"/>).</para>
-
-  </simplesect>
+  <para>Subversion's modular design (covered in <xref
+    linkend="svn.developer.layerlib"/>) and the availability of
+    language bindings (as described in <xref
+    linkend="svn.developer.usingapi.otherlangs"/>) make it a likely
+    candidate for use as an extension or backend to other pieces of
+    software.  For a listing of many third-party tools that are using
+    Subversion functionality under-the-hood, check out the Links page on the
+    Subversion website (<ulink
+      url="http://subversion.tigris.org/project_links.html"/>).</para>
 
 </appendix>
 

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/app-webdav.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/app-webdav.xml	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/app-webdav.xml	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -1,21 +1,18 @@
 <appendix id="svn.webdav">
   <title>WebDAV and Autoversioning</title>
 
-  <simplesect>
+  <para>WebDAV is an extension to HTTP, and is growing more and more
+    popular as a standard for file-sharing.  Today's operating systems
+    are becoming extremely Web-aware, and many now have built-in
+    support for mounting <quote>shares</quote> exported by WebDAV
+    servers.</para>
+
+  <para>If you use Apache/mod_dav_svn as your Subversion network
+    server, then to some extent, you are also running a WebDAV server.
+    This appendix gives some background on the nature of this
+    protocol, how Subversion uses it, and how well Subversion
+    interoperates with other software that is WebDAV-aware.</para>
 
-    <para>WebDAV is an extension to HTTP, and is growing more and more
-      popular as a standard for file-sharing.  Today's operating
-      systems are becoming extremely Web-aware, and many now have
-      built-in support for mounting <quote>shares</quote> exported by
-      WebDAV servers.</para>
-
-    <para>If you use Apache/mod_dav_svn as your Subversion network
-      server, then to some extent, you are also running a WebDAV
-      server.  This appendix gives some background on the nature of
-      this protocol, how Subversion uses it, and how well Subversion
-      interoperates with other software that is WebDAV-aware.</para>
-
-  </simplesect>
 
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
   <!-- ================================================================= -->

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/book.xml	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/book.xml	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0"?>
-<!DOCTYPE book SYSTEM "../../tools/dtd/dblite.dtd"
+<!DOCTYPE book SYSTEM "../../tools/dtd/docbook-4.4/docbookx.dtd"
 [
 <!ENTITY % vers   SYSTEM "version.xml">
 %vers;
@@ -24,15 +24,16 @@
 <book id="svn">
   <title>Version Control with Subversion</title>
 
-  <!-- Using revnumber would be more appropriate, but our stylesheets -->
-  <!-- don't seem to render it. -->
-  <subtitle>For Subversion 1.3</subtitle>
-  <subtitle>(book compiled from &svn.version;)</subtitle>
-
   <bookinfo>
 
-    <edition>First</edition>
-    <isbn>0-59600-448-6</isbn>
+    <subtitle>For Subversion 1.3</subtitle>
+
+    <!-- Using revnumber would be more appropriate, but our stylesheets -->
+    <!-- don't seem to render it. -->
+    <subtitle>(Compiled from &svn.l10n_revision;&svn.version;)</subtitle>
+
+    <edition>Second</edition>
+    <isbn>?-?????-???-?</isbn>
     <authorgroup>
 
       <author>
@@ -53,8 +54,8 @@
     </authorgroup>
 
     <editor>
-      <firstname>Linda</firstname>
-      <surname>Mui</surname>
+      <firstname>Tatiana</firstname>
+      <surname>Apandi</surname>
     </editor>
 
     <pagenums>350 pages (est.)</pagenums>

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-advanced-topics.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-advanced-topics.xml	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-advanced-topics.xml	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -1,43 +1,40 @@
 <chapter id="svn.advanced">
   <title>Advanced Topics</title>
 
-  <simplesect>
+  <para>If you've been reading this book chapter by chapter, from
+    start to finish, you should by now have acquired enough
+    knowledge to use the Subversion client to perform the most
+    common version control operations.  You understand how to
+    checkout a working copy from a Subversion repository.  You are
+    comfortable with submitting and receiving changes using the
+    <command>svn commit</command> and <command>svn update</command>
+    functions.  You've probably even developed a reflex which causes
+    you to run the <command>svn status</command> command almost
+    unconsciously.  For all intents and purposes, you are ready to
+    use Subversion in a typical environment.</para>
+
+  <para>But the Subversion feature set doesn't stop at <quote>common
+    version control operations</quote>.</para>
+
+  <para>This chapter highlights some of Subversion's features that
+    aren't quite so regularly used.  In it, we will discuss
+    Subversion's property (or <quote>metadata</quote>) support, and
+    how to modify Subversion's default behaviors by tweaking its
+    run-time configuration area.  We will describe how you can use
+    externals definitions to instruct Subversion to pull data from
+    multiple repositories.  We'll cover in detail some of the
+    additional client- and server-side tools that are part of the
+    Subversion distribution.</para>
+
+  <para>Before reading this chapter, you should be familiar with the
+    basic file and directory versioning capabilities of Subversion.
+    If you haven't already read about those, or if you need a
+    refresher, we recommend that you check out <xref
+    linkend="svn.basic" /> and <xref linkend="svn.tour" />.  Once
+    you've mastered the basics and consumed this chapter, you'll be
+    a Subversion power-user!
+  </para>
 
-    <para>If you've been reading this book chapter by chapter, from
-      start to finish, you should by now have acquired enough
-      knowledge to use the Subversion client to perform the most
-      common version control operations.  You understand how to
-      checkout a working copy from a Subversion repository.  You are
-      comfortable with submitting and receiving changes using the
-      <command>svn commit</command> and <command>svn update</command>
-      functions.  You've probably even developed a reflex which causes
-      you to run the <command>svn status</command> command almost
-      unconsciously.  For all intents and purposes, you are ready to
-      use Subversion in a typical environment.</para>
-
-    <para>But the Subversion feature set doesn't stop at <quote>common
-      version control operations</quote>.</para>
-
-    <para>This chapter highlights some of Subversion's features that
-      aren't quite so regularly used.  In it, we will discuss
-      Subversion's property (or <quote>metadata</quote>) support, and
-      how to modify Subversion's default behaviors by tweaking its
-      run-time configuration area.  We will describe how you can use
-      externals definitions to instruct Subversion to pull data from
-      multiple repositories.  We'll cover in detail some of the
-      additional client- and server-side tools that are part of the
-      Subversion distribution.</para>
-
-    <para>Before reading this chapter, you should be familiar with the
-      basic file and directory versioning capabilities of Subversion.
-      If you haven't already read about those, or if you need a
-      refresher, we recommend that you check out <xref
-      linkend="svn.basic" /> and <xref linkend="svn.tour" />.  Once
-      you've mastered the basics and consumed this chapter, you'll be
-      a Subversion power-user!
-    </para>
-
-  </simplesect>
 
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
   <!-- ================================================================= -->

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-basic-usage.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-basic-usage.xml	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-basic-usage.xml	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -1,26 +1,23 @@
 <chapter id="svn.tour">
   <title>Basic Usage</title>
 
-  <simplesect>
+  <para>Now we will go into the details of using Subversion.  By the
+    time you reach the end of this chapter, you will be able to
+    perform almost all the tasks you need to use Subversion in a
+    normal day's work.  You'll start with an initial checkout of
+    your code, and walk through making changes and examining those
+    changes.  You'll also see how to bring changes made by others
+    into your working copy, examine them, and work through any
+    conflicts that might arise.</para>
+
+  <para>Note that this chapter is not meant to be an exhaustive list
+    of all Subversion's commands—rather, it's a conversational
+    introduction to the most common Subversion tasks you'll
+    encounter.  This chapter assumes that you've read and understood
+    <xref linkend="svn.basic"/> and are familiar with the general
+    model of Subversion.  For a complete reference of all commands,
+    see <xref linkend="svn.ref"/>.</para>
 
-    <para>Now we will go into the details of using Subversion.  By the
-      time you reach the end of this chapter, you will be able to
-      perform almost all the tasks you need to use Subversion in a
-      normal day's work.  You'll start with an initial checkout of
-      your code, and walk through making changes and examining those
-      changes.  You'll also see how to bring changes made by others
-      into your working copy, examine them, and work through any
-      conflicts that might arise.</para>
-
-    <para>Note that this chapter is not meant to be an exhaustive list
-      of all Subversion's commands—rather, it's a conversational
-      introduction to the most common Subversion tasks you'll
-      encounter.  This chapter assumes that you've read and understood
-      <xref linkend="svn.basic"/> and are familiar with the general
-      model of Subversion.  For a complete reference of all commands,
-      see <xref linkend="svn.ref"/>.</para>
-
-  </simplesect>
 
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
@@ -809,7 +806,7 @@
         two commands to find out what files have changed in your
         working copy, and then perhaps the third to revert some (or
         all) of those changes.</para>
-      
+
       <!-- pll - Fri 07 Feb 2003 12:55:07                                   -->
       <!-- I find this following paragraph a little unclear.  Mostly for    -->
       <!-- the same reasons as I found the sidebar above unclear.  There    -->
@@ -817,6 +814,37 @@
       <!-- therefore, nothing has been clearly stated wrt the fact that the -->
       <!-- repository may not be local.                                     -->
       
+      <sidebar>
+        <title>Look Ma! No Network!</title>
+
+        <para>All three of these commands (<command>svn
+          status</command>, <command>svn diff</command>, and
+          <command>svn revert</command>) can be used without any
+          network access.  This makes it easy to manage your
+          changes-in-progress when you are somewhere without a network
+          connection, such as travelling on an airplane, riding a
+          commuter train or hacking on the beach.</para>
+
+        <para>Subversion does this by keeping private caches of
+          pristine versions of each versioned file inside of the
+          <filename>.svn</filename> administrative areas.  This allows
+          Subversion to report—and revert—local
+          modifications to those files <emphasis>without network
+          access</emphasis>.  This cache (called the
+          <quote>text-base</quote>) also allows Subversion to send the
+          user's local modifications during a commit to the server as
+          a compressed <firstterm>delta</firstterm> (or
+          <quote>difference</quote>) against the pristine version.
+          Having this cache is a tremendous benefit—even if you
+          have a fast net connection, it's much faster to send only a
+          file's changes rather than the whole file to the server.  At
+          first glance, this might not seem that important, but
+          imagine the repercussions if you try to commit a one line
+          change to a 400MB file and have to send the whole file to
+          the server!</para>
+
+      </sidebar>
+
       <para>Subversion has been optimized to help you with this task,
         and is able to do many things without communicating with the
         repository.  In particular, your working copy contains a
@@ -1291,36 +1319,6 @@
 
       </sect3>
 
-      <sidebar>
-          <title>Look Ma! No Network!</title>
-
-        <para>All three of these commands (<command>svn
-          status</command>, <command>svn diff</command>, and
-          <command>svn revert</command>) can be used without any
-          network access.  This makes it easy to manage your
-          changes-in-progress when you are somewhere without a network
-          connection, such as travelling on an airplane, riding a
-          commuter train or hacking on the beach.</para>
-
-        <para>Subversion does this by keeping private caches of
-          pristine versions of each versioned file inside of the
-          <filename>.svn</filename> administrative areas.  This allows
-          Subversion to report—and revert—local
-          modifications to those files <emphasis>without network
-          access</emphasis>.  This cache (called the
-          <quote>text-base</quote>) also allows Subversion to send the
-          user's local modifications during a commit to the server as
-          a compressed <firstterm>delta</firstterm> (or
-          <quote>difference</quote>) against the pristine version.
-          Having this cache is a tremendous benefit—even if you
-          have a fast net connection, it's much faster to send only a
-          file's changes rather than the whole file to the server.  At
-          first glance, this might not seem that important, but
-          imagine the repercussions if you try to commit a one line
-          change to a 400MB file and have to send the whole file to
-          the server!</para>
-    </sidebar>
-
     </sect2>
 
     <!-- =============================================================== -->
@@ -1587,12 +1585,20 @@
 $ svn commit -m "Go ahead and use my sandwich, discarding Sally's edits."
 </screen>
 
-        <para>Remember, if you ever get confused while editing the
-          conflicted file, you can always consult the three files that
-          Subversion creates for you in your working
-          copy—including your file as it was before you updated.
-          You can even use a third-party interactive merging tool to
-          examine those three files.</para>
+        <para>Note that <command>svn resolved</command>, unlike most
+          of the other commands we deal with in this chapter, requires
+          an argument.  In any case, you want to be careful and only
+          run <command>svn resolved</command> when you're certain that
+          you've fixed the conflict in your file—once the
+          temporary files are removed, Subversion will let you commit
+          the file even if it still contains conflict markers.</para>
+      
+        <para>If you ever get confused while editing the conflicted
+          file, you can always consult the three files that Subversion
+          creates for you in your working copy—including your
+          file as it was before you updated.  You can even use a
+          third-party interactive merging tool to examine those three
+          files.</para>
 
       </sect3>
 
@@ -1635,15 +1641,6 @@
 
       </sect3>
 
-      <para>Now you're ready to check in your changes.  Note that
-        <command>svn resolved</command>, unlike most of the other
-        commands we've dealt with in this chapter, requires an
-        argument.  In any case, you want to be careful and only run
-        <command>svn resolved</command> when you're certain that you've
-        fixed the conflict in your file—once the temporary files
-        are removed, Subversion will let you commit the file even if
-        it still contains conflict markers.</para>
-      
     </sect2>
     
     <!-- =============================================================== -->

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-branching-and-merging.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-branching-and-merging.xml	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-branching-and-merging.xml	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -1,21 +1,18 @@
 <chapter id="svn.branchmerge">
   <title>Branching and Merging</title>
 
-  <simplesect>
+  <para>Branching, tagging, and merging are concepts common to
+    almost all version control systems.  If you're not familiar with
+    these ideas, we provide a good introduction in this chapter.  If
+    you are familiar, then hopefully you'll find it interesting to
+    see how Subversion implements these ideas.</para>
+
+  <para>Branching is a fundamental part of version control.  If
+    you're going to allow Subversion to manage your data, then this
+    is a feature you'll eventually come to depend on.  This chapter
+    assumes that you're already familiar with Subversion's basic
+    concepts (<xref linkend="svn.basic"/>).</para>
 
-    <para>Branching, tagging, and merging are concepts common to
-      almost all version control systems.  If you're not familiar with
-      these ideas, we provide a good introduction in this chapter.  If
-      you are familiar, then hopefully you'll find it interesting to
-      see how Subversion implements these ideas.</para>
-
-    <para>Branching is a fundamental part of version control.  If
-      you're going to allow Subversion to manage your data, then this
-      is a feature you'll eventually come to depend on.  This chapter
-      assumes that you're already familiar with Subversion's basic
-      concepts (<xref linkend="svn.basic"/>).</para>
-
-  </simplesect>
 
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
@@ -862,39 +859,6 @@
 
       </sect3>
 
-      <sidebar>
-        <title>Subversion and Changesets</title>
-
-        <para>Everyone seems to have a slightly different definition
-          of <quote>changeset</quote>, or at least a different
-          expectation of what it means for a version control system to
-          have <quote>changeset features</quote>.  For our purpose,
-          let's say that a changeset is just a collection of changes
-          with a unique name.  The changes might include textual edits
-          to file contents, modifications to tree structure, or tweaks
-          to metadata.  In more common speak, a changeset is just a
-          patch with a name you can refer to.</para>
-
-        <para>In Subversion, a global revision number N names a tree
-          in the repository: it's the way the repository looked after
-          the Nth commit.  It's also the name of an implicit
-          changeset: if you compare tree N with tree N-1, you can
-          derive the exact patch that was committed.  For this reason,
-          it's easy to think of <quote>revision N</quote> as not just
-          a tree, but a changeset as well.  If you use an issue
-          tracker to manage bugs, you can use the revision numbers to
-          refer to particular patches that fix bugs—for example,
-          <quote>this issue was fixed by revision 9238.</quote>.
-          Somebody can then run <command>svn log -r9238</command> to
-          read about the exact changeset which fixed the bug, and run
-          <command>svn diff -r9237:9238</command> to see the patch
-          itself.  And Subversion's <literal>merge</literal> command
-          also uses revision numbers.  You can merge specific changesets
-          from one branch to another by naming them in the merge
-          arguments: <command>svn merge -r9237:9238</command> would
-          merge changeset #9238 into your working copy.</para>
-      </sidebar>
-
       <sect3 id="svn.branchmerge.copychanges.bestprac.merge">
         <title>Merge Conflicts</title>
 
@@ -1276,6 +1240,39 @@
         changeset #303 to our working copy
         <emphasis>backwards</emphasis>.</para>
     
+      <sidebar>
+        <title>Subversion and Changesets</title>
+
+        <para>Everyone seems to have a slightly different definition
+          of <quote>changeset</quote>, or at least a different
+          expectation of what it means for a version control system to
+          have <quote>changeset features</quote>.  For our purpose,
+          let's say that a changeset is just a collection of changes
+          with a unique name.  The changes might include textual edits
+          to file contents, modifications to tree structure, or tweaks
+          to metadata.  In more common speak, a changeset is just a
+          patch with a name you can refer to.</para>
+
+        <para>In Subversion, a global revision number N names a tree
+          in the repository: it's the way the repository looked after
+          the Nth commit.  It's also the name of an implicit
+          changeset: if you compare tree N with tree N-1, you can
+          derive the exact patch that was committed.  For this reason,
+          it's easy to think of <quote>revision N</quote> as not just
+          a tree, but a changeset as well.  If you use an issue
+          tracker to manage bugs, you can use the revision numbers to
+          refer to particular patches that fix bugs—for example,
+          <quote>this issue was fixed by revision 9238.</quote>.
+          Somebody can then run <command>svn log -r9238</command> to
+          read about the exact changeset which fixed the bug, and run
+          <command>svn diff -r9237:9238</command> to see the patch
+          itself.  And Subversion's <literal>merge</literal> command
+          also uses revision numbers.  You can merge specific changesets
+          from one branch to another by naming them in the merge
+          arguments: <command>svn merge -r9237:9238</command> would
+          merge changeset #9238 into your working copy.</para>
+      </sidebar>
+
       <para>Keep in mind that rolling back a change like this is just
         like any other <command>svn merge</command> operation, so you
         should use <command>svn status</command> and <command>svn

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-customizing-svn.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-customizing-svn.xml	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-customizing-svn.xml	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -1,11 +1,8 @@
 <chapter id="svn.customization">
   <title>Customizing Your Subversion Experience</title>
 
-  <simplesect>
+  <para>### TODO ###</para>
 
-    <para>### TODO ###</para>
-
-  </simplesect>
 
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
   <!-- ================================================================= -->

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-developer-info.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-developer-info.xml	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-developer-info.xml	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -1,29 +1,26 @@
 <chapter id="svn.developer">
   <title>Developer Information</title>
   
-  <simplesect>
+  <para>Subversion has a modular design, implemented as a collection
+    of C libraries.  Each library has a well-defined purpose and
+    interface, and those interfaces are available not only for
+    Subversion itself to use, but for any software that wishes to
+    embed or otherwise programmatically control Subversion.  Most of
+    those interfaces are available not only in C, but also in
+    higher-level languages such as Python or Java.</para>
+
+  <para>This chapter is for those who wish to interact with
+    Subversion through its public Application Programming Interface
+    (API) or various language bindings.  If you wish to write robust
+    wrapper scripts around Subversion functionality to simplify your
+    own life, are trying to develop more complex integrations
+    between Subversion and other pieces of software, or just have an
+    interest in Subversion's various library modules and what they
+    offer, this chapter is for you.  If, however, you don't foresee
+    yourself participating with Subversion at such a level, feel
+    free to skip this chapter with the confidence that your
+    experience as a Subversion user will not be affected.</para>
 
-    <para>Subversion has a modular design, implemented as a collection
-      of C libraries.  Each library has a well-defined purpose and
-      interface, and those interfaces are available not only for
-      Subversion itself to use, but for any software that wishes to
-      embed or otherwise programmatically control Subversion.  Most of
-      those interfaces are available not only in C, but also in
-      higher-level languages such as Python or Java.</para>
-
-    <para>This chapter is for those who wish to interact with
-      Subversion through its public Application Programming Interface
-      (API) or various language bindings.  If you wish to write robust
-      wrapper scripts around Subversion functionality to simplify your
-      own life, are trying to develop more complex integrations
-      between Subversion and other pieces of software, or just have an
-      interest in Subversion's various library modules and what they
-      offer, this chapter is for you.  If, however, you don't foresee
-      yourself participating with Subversion at such a level, feel
-      free to skip this chapter with the confidence that your
-      experience as a Subversion user will not be affected.</para>
-
-  </simplesect>
 
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
@@ -911,17 +908,14 @@
         used by any program to do these conversions.</para>
 
       <para>Also, Subversion APIs require all URL parameters to be
-        properly URI-encoded.  So, instead of passing <systemitem
-        class="url">file:///home/username/My File.txt</systemitem> as
-        the URL of a file named <literal>My File.txt</literal>, you
-        need to pass <systemitem
-        class="url">file:///home/username/My%20File.txt</systemitem>.
-        Again, Subversion supplies helper functions that your
-        application can
+        properly URI-encoded.  So, instead of passing
+        <uri>file:///home/username/My File.txt</uri> as the URL of a
+        file named <literal>My File.txt</literal>, you need to pass
+        <uri>file:///home/username/My%20File.txt</uri>.  Again,
+        Subversion supplies helper functions that your application can
         use—<function>svn_path_uri_encode()</function> and
-        <function>svn_path_uri_decode()</function>, for URI encoding and
-        decoding, respectively.</para>
-    </sect2>
+        <function>svn_path_uri_decode()</function>, for URI encoding
+        and decoding, respectively.</para> </sect2>
 
     <!-- =============================================================== -->
     <sect2 id="svn.developer.usingapi.otherlangs">

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-fundamental-concepts.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-fundamental-concepts.xml	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-fundamental-concepts.xml	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -1,19 +1,17 @@
 <chapter id="svn.basic">
   <title>Fundamental Concepts</title>
 
-  <simplesect>
-    <para>This chapter is a short, casual introduction to Subversion.
-      If you're new to version control, this chapter is definitely for
-      you.  We begin with a discussion of general version control
-      concepts, work our way into the specific ideas behind
-      Subversion, and show some simple examples of Subversion in
-      use.</para>
-    
-    <para>Even though the examples in this chapter show people sharing
-      collections of program source code, keep in mind that Subversion
-      can manage any sort of file collection—it's not limited to
-      helping computer programmers.</para>
-  </simplesect>
+  <para>This chapter is a short, casual introduction to Subversion.
+    If you're new to version control, this chapter is definitely for
+    you.  We begin with a discussion of general version control
+    concepts, work our way into the specific ideas behind
+    Subversion, and show some simple examples of Subversion in
+    use.</para>
+    
+  <para>Even though the examples in this chapter show people sharing
+    collections of program source code, keep in mind that Subversion
+    can manage any sort of file collection—it's not limited to
+    helping computer programmers.</para>
   
   
   <!-- ================================================================= -->

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-preface.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-preface.xml	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-preface.xml	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -1,47 +1,43 @@
 <preface id="svn.preface">
   <title>Preface</title>
   
-  <simplesect>
-    
-    <blockquote>
-      <attribution>Brian W. Fitzpatrick</attribution>
-      <para><quote>If C gives you enough rope to hang yourself, think
-        of Subversion as a sort of rope storage facility.</quote></para>
-    </blockquote>
-
-    <para>In the world of open-source software, the Concurrent
-      Versions System (CVS) has long been the tool of choice for
-      version control.  And rightly so.  CVS itself is free software,
-      and its non-restrictive <foreignphrase>modus
-      operandi</foreignphrase> and support for networked
-      operation—which allow dozens of geographically dispersed
-      programmers to share their work—fits the collaborative
-      nature of the open-source world very well.  CVS and its
-      semi-chaotic development model have become cornerstones of
-      open-source culture.
-    </para>
-
-    <para>But like many tools, CVS is starting to show its age.
-      Subversion is a relatively new version control system designed
-      to be the successor to CVS.  The designers set out to win the
-      hearts of CVS users in two ways: by creating an open-source
-      system with a design (and <quote>look and feel</quote>) similar
-      to CVS, and by attempting to fix most of CVS's noticeable flaws.
-      While the result isn't necessarily the next great evolution in
-      version control design, Subversion <emphasis>is</emphasis> very
-      powerful, very usable, and very flexible.
-    </para>
-
-    <para>This book is written to document the 1.3 series of the
-      Subversion version control system.  We have made every attempt to be
-      thorough in our coverage.  However, Subversion has a thriving
-      and energetic development community, so there are already a
-      number of features and improvements planned for future versions
-      of Subversion that may change some of the commands and specific
-      notes in this book.
-    </para>
-
-  </simplesect>
+  <blockquote>
+    <attribution>Brian W. Fitzpatrick</attribution>
+    <para><quote>If C gives you enough rope to hang yourself, think
+      of Subversion as a sort of rope storage facility.</quote></para>
+  </blockquote>
+
+  <para>In the world of open-source software, the Concurrent
+    Versions System (CVS) has long been the tool of choice for
+    version control.  And rightly so.  CVS itself is free software,
+    and its non-restrictive <foreignphrase>modus
+    operandi</foreignphrase> and support for networked
+    operation—which allow dozens of geographically dispersed
+    programmers to share their work—fits the collaborative
+    nature of the open-source world very well.  CVS and its
+    semi-chaotic development model have become cornerstones of
+    open-source culture.
+  </para>
+
+  <para>But like many tools, CVS is starting to show its age.
+    Subversion is a relatively new version control system designed
+    to be the successor to CVS.  The designers set out to win the
+    hearts of CVS users in two ways: by creating an open-source
+    system with a design (and <quote>look and feel</quote>) similar
+    to CVS, and by attempting to fix most of CVS's noticeable flaws.
+    While the result isn't necessarily the next great evolution in
+    version control design, Subversion <emphasis>is</emphasis> very
+    powerful, very usable, and very flexible.
+  </para>
+
+  <para>This book is written to document the 1.3 series of the
+    Subversion version control system.  We have made every attempt to be
+    thorough in our coverage.  However, Subversion has a thriving
+    and energetic development community, so there are already a
+    number of features and improvements planned for future versions
+    of Subversion that may change some of the commands and specific
+    notes in this book.
+  </para>
 
 
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
@@ -85,6 +81,12 @@
       and a special appendix summarizes most of the differences
       between CVS and Subversion.</para>
 
+    <para>Note also that the source code examples used throughout the
+      book are only examples.  While they will compile with the proper
+      compiler incantations, they are intended to illustrate a
+      particular scenario, not necessarily serve as examples of good
+      programming style or practices.</para>
+
   </sect1>
 
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
@@ -224,12 +226,6 @@
       </warning>
     </sect2>
 
-    <para>Note that the source code examples are just
-      that—examples.  While they will compile with the proper
-      compiler incantations, they are intended to illustrate the
-      problem at hand, not necessarily serve as examples of good
-      programming style.</para>
-
   </sect1>
 
   <!-- ================================================================= -->

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-reference.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-reference.xml	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-reference.xml	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -1,14 +1,13 @@
 <chapter id="svn.ref">
   <title>Subversion Complete Reference</title>
   
-  <simplesect>
-    <para>This chapter is intended to be a complete reference to using
-      Subversion.  This includes the command line client
-      (<command>svn</command>) and all its subcommands, as well as the
-      repository administration programs (<command>svnadmin</command>
-      and <command>svnlook</command>) and their respective
-      subcommands.</para>
-  </simplesect>
+  <para>This chapter is intended to be a complete reference to using
+    Subversion.  This includes the command line client
+    (<command>svn</command>) and all its subcommands, as well as the
+    repository administration programs (<command>svnadmin</command>
+    and <command>svnlook</command>) and their respective
+    subcommands.</para>
+
   
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
@@ -4481,7 +4480,7 @@
 
       <refentry id="svn.ref.svnadmin.c.help">
         <refnamediv>
-          <refname>svnadmin help</refname>
+          <refname>svnadmin help</refname> <refpurpose>Help!</refpurpose>
         </refnamediv>
         <refsect1>
           <title>Synopsis</title>
@@ -5410,7 +5409,7 @@
 
       <refentry id="svn.ref.svnlook.c.help">
         <refnamediv>
-          <refname>svnlook help</refname>
+          <refname>svnlook help</refname> <refpurpose>Help!</refpurpose>
         </refnamediv>
         <refsect1>
           <title>Synopsis</title>

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-repository-admin.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-repository-admin.xml	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-repository-admin.xml	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -1,40 +1,37 @@
 <chapter id="svn.reposadmin">
   <title>Repository Administration</title>
 
-  <simplesect>
+  <para>### TODO:  Heavy (re-)construction will be happenin' here! ###</para>
 
-    <para>### TODO:  Heavy (re-)construction will be happenin' here! ###</para>
+  <para>The Subversion repository is the central storehouse of
+    versioned data for any number of projects.  As such, it becomes
+    an obvious candidate for all the love and attention an
+    administrator can offer.  While the repository is generally a
+    low-maintenance item, it is important to understand how to
+    properly configure and care for it so that potential problems
+    are avoided, and actual problems are safely resolved.</para>
+
+  <para>In this chapter, we'll discuss how to create and configure
+    a Subversion repository.  We'll also talk about repository
+    maintenance, including the use of the <command>svnlook</command>
+    and <command>svnadmin</command> tools (which are provided with
+    Subversion).  We'll address some common questions and mistakes,
+    and give some suggestions on how to arrange the data in the
+    repository.</para>
+
+  <para>If you plan to access a Subversion repository only in the
+    role of a user whose data is under version control (that is, via
+    a Subversion client), you can skip this chapter altogether.
+    However, if you are, or wish to become, a Subversion repository
+    administrator,
+    <footnote>
+      <para>This may sound really prestigious and lofty, but we're
+        just talking about anyone who is interested in that
+        mysterious realm beyond the working copy where everyone's
+        data hangs out.</para>
+    </footnote>
+    you should definitely pay attention to this chapter.</para>
 
-    <para>The Subversion repository is the central storehouse of
-      versioned data for any number of projects.  As such, it becomes
-      an obvious candidate for all the love and attention an
-      administrator can offer.  While the repository is generally a
-      low-maintenance item, it is important to understand how to
-      properly configure and care for it so that potential problems
-      are avoided, and actual problems are safely resolved.</para>
-
-    <para>In this chapter, we'll discuss how to create and configure
-      a Subversion repository.  We'll also talk about repository
-      maintenance, including the use of the <command>svnlook</command>
-      and <command>svnadmin</command> tools (which are provided with
-      Subversion).  We'll address some common questions and mistakes,
-      and give some suggestions on how to arrange the data in the
-      repository.</para>
-
-    <para>If you plan to access a Subversion repository only in the
-      role of a user whose data is under version control (that is, via
-      a Subversion client), you can skip this chapter altogether.
-      However, if you are, or wish to become, a Subversion repository
-      administrator,
-      <footnote>
-        <para>This may sound really prestigious and lofty, but we're
-          just talking about anyone who is interested in that
-          mysterious realm beyond the working copy where everyone's
-          data hangs out.</para>
-      </footnote>
-      you should definitely pay attention to this chapter.</para>
-
-  </simplesect>
 
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
   <!-- ================================================================= -->

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-server-configuration.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-server-configuration.xml	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/ch-server-configuration.xml	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -1,25 +1,21 @@
 <chapter id="svn.serverconfig">
   <title>Server Configuration</title>
   
-  <simplesect>
+  <para>A Subversion repository can be accessed simultaneously by
+    clients running on the same machine on which the repository
+    resides using the <literal>file:///</literal> method.  But the
+    typical Subversion setup involves a single server machine being
+    accessed from clients on computers all over the office—or,
+    perhaps, all over the world.</para>
+    
+  <para>This section describes how to get your Subversion repository
+    exposed outside its host machine for use by remote clients.  We
+    will cover Subversion's currently available server mechanisms,
+    discussing the configuration and use of each.  After reading
+    this section, you should be able to decide which networking
+    setup is right for your needs, and understand how to enable such
+    a setup on your host computer.</para>
     
-    <para>A Subversion repository can be accessed simultaneously by
-      clients running on the same machine on which the repository
-      resides using the <literal>file:///</literal> method.  But the
-      typical Subversion setup involves a single server machine being
-      accessed from clients on computers all over the office—or,
-      perhaps, all over the world.</para>
-
-    
-    <para>This section describes how to get your Subversion repository
-      exposed outside its host machine for use by remote clients.  We
-      will cover Subversion's currently available server mechanisms,
-      discussing the configuration and use of each.  After reading
-      this section, you should be able to decide which networking
-      setup is right for your needs, and understand how to enable such
-      a setup on your host computer.</para>
-    
-  </simplesect>
   
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
@@ -538,12 +534,11 @@
         <emphasis>absolute</emphasis> path in the repository URL.  For
         example, if a repository is located at
         <filename>/usr/local/repositories/project1</filename>, then a
-        client would reach it via <systemitem
-        class="url">svn://host.example.com/usr/local/repositories/project1
-        </systemitem>.  To increase security, you can pass the
-        <option>-r</option> option to <command>svnserve</command>,
-        which restricts it to exporting only repositories below that
-        path:</para>
+        client would reach it via
+        <uri>svn://host.example.com/usr/local/repositories/project1</uri>.
+        To increase security, you can pass the <option>-r</option>
+        option to <command>svnserve</command>, which restricts it to
+        exporting only repositories below that path:</para>
       
       <screen>
 $ svnserve -d -r /usr/local/repositories
@@ -1191,10 +1186,8 @@
         common parent directory.  For example, if you know you will be
         creating multiple Subversion repositories in a directory
         <filename>/usr/local/svn</filename> that would be accessed via
-        URLs like <systemitem
-        class="url">http://my.server.com/svn/repos1</systemitem>,
-        <systemitem
-        class="url">http://my.server.com/svn/repos2</systemitem>, and
+        URLs like <uri>http://my.server.com/svn/repos1</uri>,
+        <uri>http://my.server.com/svn/repos2</uri>, and
         so on, you could use the <filename>httpd.conf</filename>
         configuration syntax in the following example:</para>
               

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/copyright.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/copyright.xml	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/copyright.xml	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -1,8 +1,7 @@
 <appendix id="svn.copyright">
   <title>Copyright</title>
 
-  <simplesect>
-    <programlisting>
+  <programlisting>
 
 Copyright (c) 2002-2006
 Ben Collins-Sussman, Brian W. Fitzpatrick, C. Michael Pilato.  
@@ -301,7 +300,7 @@
 
 ====================================================================
 </programlisting>
-  </simplesect>
+
 </appendix>
 
 <!--

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/foreword.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/foreword.xml	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/foreword.xml	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -4,125 +4,124 @@
 ch00.xml. -->
 
 <preface id="svn.foreword">
-  <title>Foreword</title>
 
-  <simplesect>
+  <prefaceinfo>
+    <author>
+      <firstname>Karl</firstname>
+      <surname>Fogel</surname>
+    </author>
+    <pubdate>Chicago, March 14, 2004</pubdate>
+  </prefaceinfo>
+
+  <title>Foreword</title>
 
-    <para>A bad Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ) sheet is one that is
-      composed not of the questions people actually asked, but of the
-      questions the FAQ's author <emphasis>wished</emphasis> people
-      had asked.  Perhaps you've seen the type before:</para>
-
-    <blockquote>
-      <para>Q: How can I use Glorbosoft XYZ to maximize team
-        productivity?</para>
-    </blockquote>
-
-    <blockquote>
-      <para>A: Many of our customers want to know how they can
-        maximize productivity through our patented office groupware
-        innovations.  The answer is simple: first, click on the
-        <quote><literal>File</literal></quote> menu, scroll down to
-        <quote><literal>Increase Productivity</literal></quote>,
-        then…</para>
-    </blockquote>
-
-    <para>The problem with such FAQs is that they are not, in a
-      literal sense, FAQs at all.  No one ever called the tech support
-      line and asked, <quote>How can we maximize
-      productivity?</quote>.  Rather, people asked highly specific
-      questions, like, <quote>How can we change the calendaring system
-      to send reminders two days in advance instead of one?</quote>
-      and so on.  But it's a lot easier to make up imaginary
-      Frequently Asked Questions than it is to discover the real ones.
-      Compiling a true FAQ sheet requires a sustained, organized
-      effort: over the lifetime of the software, incoming questions
-      must be tracked, responses monitored, and all gathered into a
-      coherent, searchable whole that reflects the collective
-      experience of users in the wild.  It calls for the patient,
-      observant attitude of a field naturalist.  No grand
-      hypothesizing, no visionary pronouncements here—open eyes
-      and accurate note-taking are what's needed most.</para>
-
-    <para>What I love about this book is that it grew out of just such
-      a process, and shows it on every page.  It is the direct result
-      of the authors' encounters with users.  It began with Ben
-      Collins-Sussman's observation that people were asking the same
-      basic questions over and over on the Subversion mailing lists:
-      What are the standard workflows to use with Subversion?  Do
-      branches and tags work the same way as in other version control
-      systems?  How can I find out who made a particular change?</para>
-
-    <para>Frustrated at seeing the same questions day after day, Ben
-      worked intensely over a month in the summer of 2002 to write
-      <citetitle>The Subversion Handbook</citetitle>, a sixty page
-      manual that covered all the basics of using Subversion.  The
-      manual made no pretense of being complete, but it was
-      distributed with Subversion and got users over that initial hump
-      in the learning curve.  When O'Reilly and Associates decided to
-      publish a full-length Subversion book, the path of least
-      resistance was obvious: just expand the Subversion
-      handbook.</para>
-
-    <para>The three co-authors of the new book were thus presented
-      with an unusual opportunity.  Officially, their task was to
-      write a book top-down, starting from a table of contents and an
-      initial draft.  But they also had access to a steady
-      stream—indeed, an uncontrollable geyser—of bottom-up
-      source material.  Subversion was already in the hands of
-      thousands of early adopters, and those users were giving tons of
-      feedback, not only about Subversion, but about its existing
-      documentation.</para>
-
-    <para>During the entire time they wrote this book, Ben, Mike, and
-      Brian haunted the Subversion mailing lists and chat rooms
-      incessantly, carefully noting the problems users were having in
-      real-life situations.  Monitoring such feedback is part of their
-      job descriptions at CollabNet anyway, and it gave them a huge
-      advantage when they set out to document Subversion.  The book
-      they produced is grounded firmly in the bedrock of experience,
-      not in the shifting sands of wishful thinking; it combines the
-      best aspects of user manual and FAQ sheet.  This duality might
-      not be noticeable on a first reading.  Taken in order, front to
-      back, the book is simply a straightforward description of a
-      piece of software.  There's the overview, the obligatory guided
-      tour, the chapter on administrative configuration, some advanced
-      topics, and of course a command reference and troubleshooting
-      guide.  Only when you come back to it later, seeking the
-      solution to some specific problem, does its authenticity shine
-      out: the telling details that can only result from encounters
-      with the unexpected, the examples honed from genuine use cases,
-      and most of all the sensitivity to the user's needs and the
-      user's point of view.</para>
-
-    <para>Of course, no one can promise that this book will answer
-      every question you have about Subversion.  Sometimes, the
-      precision with which it anticipates your questions will seem
-      eerily telepathic; yet occasionally, you will stumble into a
-      hole in the community's knowledge, and come away empty-handed.
-      When this happens, the best thing you can do is email
-      <email>users at subversion.tigris.org</email> and present your
-      problem.  The authors are still there, still watching, and they
-      include not just the three listed on the cover, but many others
-      who contributed corrections and original material.  From the
-      community's point of view, solving your problem is merely a
-      pleasant side effect of a much larger project—namely,
-      slowly adjusting this book, and ultimately Subversion itself, to
-      more closely match the way people actually use it.  They are
-      eager to hear from you not merely because they can help you, but
-      because you can help them.  With Subversion as with all active
-      free software projects, <emphasis>you are not
-      alone</emphasis>.</para>
-
-    <para>Let this book be your first companion.</para>
-
-    <para>—
-      <author>
-        <firstname>Karl</firstname>
-        <surname>Fogel</surname>
-      </author>, Chicago, 14 March, 2004</para>
+  <para>A bad Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ) sheet is one that is
+    composed not of the questions people actually asked, but of the
+    questions the FAQ's author <emphasis>wished</emphasis> people
+    had asked.  Perhaps you've seen the type before:</para>
+
+  <blockquote>
+    <para>Q: How can I use Glorbosoft XYZ to maximize team
+      productivity?</para>
+  </blockquote>
+
+  <blockquote>
+    <para>A: Many of our customers want to know how they can
+      maximize productivity through our patented office groupware
+      innovations.  The answer is simple: first, click on the
+      <quote><literal>File</literal></quote> menu, scroll down to
+      <quote><literal>Increase Productivity</literal></quote>,
+      then…</para>
+  </blockquote>
+
+  <para>The problem with such FAQs is that they are not, in a
+    literal sense, FAQs at all.  No one ever called the tech support
+    line and asked, <quote>How can we maximize
+    productivity?</quote>.  Rather, people asked highly specific
+    questions, like, <quote>How can we change the calendaring system
+    to send reminders two days in advance instead of one?</quote>
+    and so on.  But it's a lot easier to make up imaginary
+    Frequently Asked Questions than it is to discover the real ones.
+    Compiling a true FAQ sheet requires a sustained, organized
+    effort: over the lifetime of the software, incoming questions
+    must be tracked, responses monitored, and all gathered into a
+    coherent, searchable whole that reflects the collective
+    experience of users in the wild.  It calls for the patient,
+    observant attitude of a field naturalist.  No grand
+    hypothesizing, no visionary pronouncements here—open eyes
+    and accurate note-taking are what's needed most.</para>
+
+  <para>What I love about this book is that it grew out of just such
+    a process, and shows it on every page.  It is the direct result
+    of the authors' encounters with users.  It began with Ben
+    Collins-Sussman's observation that people were asking the same
+    basic questions over and over on the Subversion mailing lists:
+    What are the standard workflows to use with Subversion?  Do
+    branches and tags work the same way as in other version control
+    systems?  How can I find out who made a particular change?</para>
+
+  <para>Frustrated at seeing the same questions day after day, Ben
+    worked intensely over a month in the summer of 2002 to write
+    <citetitle>The Subversion Handbook</citetitle>, a sixty page
+    manual that covered all the basics of using Subversion.  The
+    manual made no pretense of being complete, but it was
+    distributed with Subversion and got users over that initial hump
+    in the learning curve.  When O'Reilly and Associates decided to
+    publish a full-length Subversion book, the path of least
+    resistance was obvious: just expand the Subversion
+    handbook.</para>
+
+  <para>The three co-authors of the new book were thus presented
+    with an unusual opportunity.  Officially, their task was to
+    write a book top-down, starting from a table of contents and an
+    initial draft.  But they also had access to a steady
+    stream—indeed, an uncontrollable geyser—of bottom-up
+    source material.  Subversion was already in the hands of
+    thousands of early adopters, and those users were giving tons of
+    feedback, not only about Subversion, but about its existing
+    documentation.</para>
+
+  <para>During the entire time they wrote this book, Ben, Mike, and
+    Brian haunted the Subversion mailing lists and chat rooms
+    incessantly, carefully noting the problems users were having in
+    real-life situations.  Monitoring such feedback is part of their
+    job descriptions at CollabNet anyway, and it gave them a huge
+    advantage when they set out to document Subversion.  The book
+    they produced is grounded firmly in the bedrock of experience,
+    not in the shifting sands of wishful thinking; it combines the
+    best aspects of user manual and FAQ sheet.  This duality might
+    not be noticeable on a first reading.  Taken in order, front to
+    back, the book is simply a straightforward description of a
+    piece of software.  There's the overview, the obligatory guided
+    tour, the chapter on administrative configuration, some advanced
+    topics, and of course a command reference and troubleshooting
+    guide.  Only when you come back to it later, seeking the
+    solution to some specific problem, does its authenticity shine
+    out: the telling details that can only result from encounters
+    with the unexpected, the examples honed from genuine use cases,
+    and most of all the sensitivity to the user's needs and the
+    user's point of view.</para>
+
+  <para>Of course, no one can promise that this book will answer
+    every question you have about Subversion.  Sometimes, the
+    precision with which it anticipates your questions will seem
+    eerily telepathic; yet occasionally, you will stumble into a
+    hole in the community's knowledge, and come away empty-handed.
+    When this happens, the best thing you can do is email
+    <email>users at subversion.tigris.org</email> and present your
+    problem.  The authors are still there, still watching, and they
+    include not just the three listed on the cover, but many others
+    who contributed corrections and original material.  From the
+    community's point of view, solving your problem is merely a
+    pleasant side effect of a much larger project—namely,
+    slowly adjusting this book, and ultimately Subversion itself, to
+    more closely match the way people actually use it.  They are
+    eager to hear from you not merely because they can help you, but
+    because you can help them.  With Subversion as with all active
+    free software projects, <emphasis>you are not
+    alone</emphasis>.</para>
 
-  </simplesect>
+  <para>Let this book be your first companion.</para>
 
 </preface>
 

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/styles.css
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/styles.css	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/en/book/styles.css	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -142,14 +142,20 @@
     font-size: 100% !important;
 }
 
-.author
+.author, .pubdate
 {
+    margin: 0;
     font-size: 100%;
     font-style: italic;
     font-weight: normal;
     color: black;
 }
 
+.preface div.author, .preface .pubdate
+{
+    font-size: 80%;
+}
+
 .sidebar 
 {
     border-top: dotted 1px black;

Modified: branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/tools/Makefile.base-rules
==============================================================================
--- branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/tools/Makefile.base-rules	(original)
+++ branches/ora-2e-reorg/src/tools/Makefile.base-rules	Thu Dec 21 00:01:49 2006
@@ -9,11 +9,15 @@
 $(VERSION_SOURCE): version
 version:
 	@if $(SVNVERSION) . > /dev/null; then \
-	  echo '<!ENTITY svn.version "$(L10N_REVISION) '`$(SVNVERSION) .`'">' \
+	  echo '<!ENTITY svn.version "'`$(SVNVERSION) .`'">' \
 	    > $(VERSION_SOURCE).tmp; \
+	  echo '<!ENTITY svn.l10n_revision "$(L10N_REVISION)">' \
+	    >> $(VERSION_SOURCE).tmp; \
 	else \
 	  echo '<!ENTITY svn.version "">' > $(VERSION_SOURCE).tmp; \
+	  echo '<!ENTITY svn.l10n_revision "">' > $(VERSION_SOURCE).tmp; \
 	fi
+	@echo '<!ENTITY svn.date "'`date`'">' >> $(VERSION_SOURCE).tmp
 	@if cmp -s $(VERSION_SOURCE) $(VERSION_SOURCE).tmp; then \
 	  rm $(VERSION_SOURCE).tmp; \
 	else \




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