[svnbook commit] r1283 - trunk/src/en/book

sussman svnbook-dev at red-bean.com
Sat May 14 11:05:43 CDT 2005


Author: sussman
Date: Sat May 14 11:05:42 2005
New Revision: 1283

Modified:
   trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml
Log:

* src/en/book/ch07.xml 
  (Addressing Historical Ambiguity):  fix a few typos, add a to-do comment.


Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml	Sat May 14 11:05:42 2005
@@ -1749,7 +1749,7 @@
       perform on files and directories on our computers all the time,
       and operations we tend to take for granted.  And Subversion
       would like you to think they are granted.  Subversion's file
-      management support is quite liberating, afford almost as much
+      management support is quite liberating, affording almost as much
       flexibility for versioned files that you'd expect when
       manipulating your unversioned ones.  But that flexibility means
       that across the lifetime of your repository, a given versioned
@@ -1799,6 +1799,9 @@
       Frabnaggilywort releases a 1.0 version, and is downloaded and
       used daily by teems of people aiming to improve their
       lives.</para>
+    
+    <!--  "teem" is only a verb, so cmike:  please change to 'hordes'
+           or something... -->
 
     <para>It's a nice story, really, but it doesn't end there.
       Entrepreneur that you are, you've already got another think in
@@ -1832,9 +1835,9 @@
       revision is all that is needed to refer to a specific line of
       history.  Peg revisions are specified to the Subversion
       command-line client using <firstterm>at syntax</firstterm>, so
-      called because the syntax involves appending an ampersand at the
-      peg revision to the end of the path with which the revision is
-      associated.</para>
+      called because the syntax involves appending an <quote>at
+      sign</quote> at the peg revision to the end of the path with
+      which the revision is associated.</para>
 
     <para>But what of the <option>--revision (-r)</option> of which
       we've spoken so much in this book?  That revision (or set of
@@ -1859,7 +1862,7 @@
       sorts, and we know <emphasis>exactly</emphasis> where to
       go.</para>
 
-    <para>Say Long ago we created our repository, and in revision 1
+    <para>Say long ago we created our repository, and in revision 1
       added our first <filename>concept</filename> directory, plus an
       <filename>IDEA</filename> file in that directory talking about
       the concept.  After several revisions in which real code was



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