Greg Lorriman greg at
Sun Mar 6 04:41:51 CST 2005


In "The Limitations of Mixed Revisions" :

I feel that this section does not have the clarity of the rest of the 
page. Particularly I am momentarily confused by both mentions 
of "fully up to date". Perhaps a little more context? Its not that it 
is badly written, just that unlike the rest of the page it requires 
unexpected mental effort (for me) to assimilate.

Would you be interested in other "perfectionist" feedback? 



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